Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

HEAVEN AND HELL: 43. "Casualties of War"

Sunday, July 18, 2004

"Inara finds reality a harsh place to dwell. The past is not her friend and the present is a stranger to her. Jayne tries to escape a fate worse than death while River has her hands full trying to convince the crew that they have to do something that will put each of them in jeopardy."

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TITLE: "CASUALTIES OF WAR"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: RIVER/MAL.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: New. SEQUEL to "PAWNS".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Inara finds reality a harsh place to dwell. The

past is not her friend and the present is a stranger to her.

Jayne tries to escape a fate worse than death while River

has her hands full trying to convince the crew that they have

to do something that will put each of them in jeopardy."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"CASUALTIES OF WAR"

A "Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

"Why you doin' this?"

She did not reply straight away. Fussing with the needle then carefully putting it away and avoiding eye contact. Mal was tired, hurting so badly he could hardly think straight. But pain he was used to. It was the Companion's contrary behaviour that confused him. Even in the dimness of his brick cell he could tell she was conflicted and that was unexpected.

"Inara," He said softly. The tone caused her to raise her head automatically before she could stop herself. Then she was trapped in those dark eyes, like being caught in a gravity well she could not look away. The pupils darker than the half light in which they found themselves. "*Weishenme*? If that was poison why use the antidote?"

The question hurt her. Did he really think she wanted another death on her conscience, even his? "They want you alive."

Her answer sent slivers of ice through his veins. It was not what she had meant to say but it was too late to snatch the words back. She should have stayed silent. Should have let him die.

"They?" He already knew who she meant or at least he thought he did.

Ina

Comments
Sunday, 18 July 2004 13:15
Yeah, the character who has to smell and touch and taste everything under sensory deprivation would quickly become... Quite different. Hope our heroes get to him in time! And poor Inara, having to re-evaluate her world. This was was so shiny, Ali!
Monday, 19 July 2004 03:36
Well, that's just about the least friendly whorehouse ever! Zoe really should have locked the captain in his cabin--I blame her ;-)

Very creepy for poor Jayne. Did I just say "poor Jayne"? By golly, I did--amazing.
Monday, 19 July 2004 08:33
Excellent. I love the way Inara's certainty and focus is crumbling as her emotions take over. "She bit her lip. Serenity." Liked that a lot.

Very relieved the baby's OK. That bit was a bit gruesome but raised some interesting questions.

And the Jayne sections were fabulous. Made me feel all protective for the great lummox!

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