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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 11/26

Saturday, February 3, 2007

The crew are on their way . . . but time is running out.

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By request, for horatiofrog: a double bill (I just posted ch. 10).

11. Have to say I was kinda wondering that myself.

On the bridge, Mal sat in the co-pilot’s chair staring at River – or rather, staring in River’s direction; it wasn’t actually River he was looking at. Zoe came onto the bridge and noted his pensive expression.

“Something on your mind, sir?”

Mal shifted in his seat, but his gaze remained distant. “Seem a little odd to you, the way that toothless fellow just told us what we wanted to know?”

“Now you mention it, sir, it does.”

Mal blinked, his gaze returning to the present, and looked at Zoe. “I’m thinking, if I were in his position, had some timely information somebody else wanted, I might at least ask what that information was worth to him.”

Zoe considered. “Maybe he’d already been paid to pass that information along?”

Mal nodded, his jaw set in a hard line. “Tell us what we want to hear – Wash is alive, he’s right in this spot not too far away – and by the way, you best go rushing off after him, ‘cause he might not be alive much longer.”

“Trap,” Zoe said, and Mal grunted agreement. “You think Wash is even there?”

“He’s there,” River said, and they both looked at her. She shrugged, her dark hair falling forward to shadow her face. “It’s . . . Wash was never really gone, not even when we thought he was dead,” she said. “But I didn’t know that’s what I knew until I found the archive. Now I know it. It’s easier to put a finger on. When you said Haven, I knew it was right.”

“Girl. You’re spooky,” Mal said.

“I frighten myself,” River acknowledged.

“So we can’t go charging straight on in to Haven. Alliance is likely waiting,” Mal said, returning to the business at hand. He drummed his fingers on the console, thinking. “We can’t get close enough to check the situation without them seeing us.”

“They’ll certainly have a better sensor array than we do,” Zoe said.

“So we don’t have any way to know what’s waiting.”

“The Reavers

Comments
Saturday, 03 February 2007 17:35
Don't you dare.... Wash!

Wow, chilling stuff. Love the way you've developed this.

jW
Saturday, 03 February 2007 18:18
Things are moving faster in this fic, and it would be beyond twisted if the crew had to deal with wash dying...twice. Can't wait to see what you do next.
HORATIOFROG
Saturday, 03 February 2007 20:25
Lovely, lovely, nauticalgal! Thanks ever so much for the double bill!

Now that the BDR is on, can our BDH survive his injuries? Or does Coles have other plans??

Don't suppose I could talk another double feature out of you, could I? Your fans (me included) would be ever so shinily grateful... :)
EPM0001
Saturday, 03 February 2007 22:15
Oh........you can't leave us hanging like this. Please post more soon. Very exciting stuff.!!
Saturday, 03 February 2007 23:49
Doing a happy dance having two fics to read in one day! Yay! My big fear now is that with Wash blacking out he didn't turn the screen off first. Gulp! I am hoping and praying that Balch doesn't use that information to give him and Serenity up to the gorram Alliance! Also, I loved seeing the Captain using his smarts to come up with a cunning plan. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 04 February 2007 04:20
Omg this is so goood
LONG LIVE WASH
Please make him live for a very long time!
Sunday, 04 February 2007 05:19
Well now...that would have made for one hell of an episode opening!

;D

Still...brilliant chapter, nauticalgal! Definitely loved the tension moments of Serenity skirting past the Polyphemus and Wash's strained message to Serenity and Zoe:D

BEB
ASKERIAN
Tuesday, 06 February 2007 09:00
Mmmh. Nothing to add that everyone didn't already post. I'll just suggest something: please try not to spoil the fic in your own summaries? XD;;; people wouldn't even need to read the fic, they just have to read the blurbs and know every main thing that happens in the corresponding chapter. Sure, the prose is very nice, and I love the interaction, but I'd like some surprises left, too. The twists would be more suspenseful if you didn't already mention them even before I open the fic. .___.;;;
TYRIS
Monday, 06 October 2008 13:06
Heh. Amusing little shout-out with the ersatz captain of the Basilisk being Riddle.

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