Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Do You Know Who I Am?

Saturday, February 3, 2007

Post BDM, Mal/River, after <i>When I Said Go, I Never Meant Away.</i>

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4213    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Thank you for the wonderful comments and suggestions! Per request, this new chapter may not be as fluffy as the others... I'm not sure if I like it as much as the others. Maybe I'm just a sucker for fluff.

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The change was subtle. You didn't notice it right at once, but the more you saw her, the more you knew she was different. Different wasn't necessarily bad, but it left the mind to wonder what had brought this change into being.

You might notice that she spoke coherently more often than not, for example. Or you might pick up on the fact that she seemed generally happier and smiled a great deal. You might even delve so deeply into the study of her change to notice that she rarely, if ever, spoke to Inara anymore.

As her doctor, and her brother, it was his job to notice these things. It frustrated him to no end, however, that he couldn't figure out the cause of it. There had to be something he was missing, something that he hadn't seen yet.

She'd been like this for a few days now. Perhaps, she was merely healing on her own, or maybe she was just going through a more lucid period. All of her symptoms pointed to this except one. Why had she stopped talking to Inara, whom she'd never had a problem with before?

Simon sighed, wishing he knew the answer.

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She felt warm and safe in his arms. It felt like she laid there forever, drifting in an out of sleep, with a feeling of extreme contentment.

His bare chest provided a wonderfully comfortable pillow, and she relished in the fact that she could feel and hear his heart beating beneath her cheek. The gentle motion of rising and falling provided an excellent lulling sensation.

Even when she was so full of sleep that she couldn't doze anymore, she lay there awake and happy, not wanting to wake him. One of his arms was wrapped gently around her back, the other was tucked beneath his pillow. He looked so handsome and peaceful while asleep.

At last, she reluctantly moved from her warm, c

Comments
Saturday, 03 February 2007 05:19
Oh, poor River and of course, Simon the boob. I liked Mal's reaction to the fact that she had told Simon, but as the captain and a stand-up guy, I think he should confront Simon himself. He needs to admit to this and give Simon the opportunity to take a swing.
Saturday, 03 February 2007 06:01
that's next chapter :)
Saturday, 03 February 2007 06:46
Yep...Simon needs some mano-a-mano time with Mal to purge his brotherly rage before having a nice long chat with Mal about River. Cuz he really needs to see Mal truly cares for River :(

BEB
Saturday, 03 February 2007 10:15
Sorry I didn't comment any of the others, I only just got done reading them all. I'm not usually a massive Mal/River fan, but I'm in love with what you're doing here. Their relationship makes sense, and it's a mighty enjoyable read. Can't wait for the next one :-)
Saturday, 03 February 2007 10:22
I am glad that River has finally told Simon but wished she had done it earlier on rather than sneaking behind his back to see Mal. Also, the Captain cannot have been very happy doing that, as if their feelings for each other were something to be ashamed of. Had they told him earlier Simon would have slowly been able to adjust and accept it even if he didn't like of approve. Now reason and common sense may not be able to calm what he will see as his righteous rage and indignation. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 05 February 2007 09:37
Im really enjoying this, and im not much of a Mal/River fan generally, but you are writing it very well. I look forward to the next installment. I think you have the voices down quite well...

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