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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 9/26

Thursday, February 1, 2007

Mal, Zoe, and Jayne track down the toothless man. He gives them good news, and really bad news.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4388    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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9. Likely Crash and Kill Us All

After Miranda

The toothless man wasn’t difficult to find; he inhabited the same section of the city where Mal and his crew typically conducted their business.

They caught up to him in a brothel, where he was unhappily not enjoying the services of the ladies who lived there. Instead, he was sitting at a broadwave console in the madam’s office when the madam herself led them in.

“Thanks for this,” he said, indicating the broadwave.

“No problem,” the madam said smoothly. “You’re popular today. These folks are here to talk to you.”

Toothless’ gaze took them in as the madam stepped out, and he laughed. “Now, there’s a familiar face,” he said. “What do you want?” Saliva sprayed all over the madam’s desk with each hard consonant.

“Couple of weeks ago down at the scrapyard, you did some business involving this man,” Mal said, and laid a snap of Wash on the desk.

Toothless looked at the snap, and laughed. “That guy,” he said. “Yeah, matter of fact, I did. What about it?”

“You kill him?”

“Who wants to know?”

“I do. He’s on my crew, and I’d like to know what happened to him.”

Toothless looked at the snap, and shrugged. “Just business, you understand.”

“I understand,” Mal said, shooting a look at Zoe that said We understand, right? “All I want to know is what happened to my man.”

Toothless followed Mal’s gaze to Zoe, and considered. Finally he said, “I dumped him at a prison mine. Know the Foreman there.”

“Where?” Mal asked.

“Haven,” Toothless said. “Southern continent. Big mine, you can see it from the air. Look for guard towers when you start to get low.”

Haven! How many times had they been on Haven in the past two weeks, and not known how close they were? Mal drew a breath, let it out again. “He’s alive, though?”

“Not for long,” Toothless said. “Man who hired me for the job just ‘waved. Orders now are to corpsify your boy. You want him breathing, yo

Comments
Thursday, 01 February 2007 19:16
Shiny action-y scenes! I'm liking this, especially bringing Wash back for us. Thank you, and more please!!
EPM0001
Thursday, 01 February 2007 20:12
I'm so excited....let's go get Wash! Please post soon!!
ASKERIAN
Thursday, 01 February 2007 22:29
I'm a little surprised Mal didn't punch the guy in the face anyway. XD "Just business, you understand. :D *POW*"

Still reading, whee.
Thursday, 01 February 2007 23:56
For a moment there I thought we were going to find that the reason Kaylee hadn't answered was because she and Simon were busy being horizontal together, then I worried that they had been snatched, so big sigh of relief that they are okay and still on board. Hope our Big Damn Heroes get to Haven prison in time to rescue Wash. Can't wait to see Wash reunited with Zoe and the crew. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 02 February 2007 00:14
Ahttp://www...Zoe didn't beat the shit out of the Toothless Man! And I was so hoping for Zoe just going apeshit when TM told them that Wash's life was about get ended for real:(

Still...brilliant bit of writing, nauticalgal! Definitely can't wait for chapter 10:D

BEB
HORATIOFROG
Friday, 02 February 2007 01:11
Brilliant, brilliant, brilliant.

Can you post the next chapters as a double bill? I sooo want to know what happens now!
Friday, 02 February 2007 03:31
A double bill? Hmm. I'll see.
Friday, 02 February 2007 03:34
Re: Zoe going, er, all medieval? That's later . . . just wait . . .

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