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Wish I Was Somebody Else, 8/26

Sunday, January 28, 2007

Coles decides to lay a trap for <i>Serenity</i>.

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While I have a minute, here's chapter 8. For Jetflair, who has seen this before: I've revised this version just a little from the one you saw.

8. What the tyen shiao duh is going on in there?!

After Miranda

For two days after the Miranda broadwave, Coles could find out nothing. Everything was shrouded in high-level security. All he had to work from was what he already knew, and what he could guess: there had been an operative-level operation involving Serenity, and it had gone terribly wrong. The Miranda broadwave was how wrong it had gone; that information had never been meant to be public.

After two days of fruitless and frantic attempts to discover what might have happened to Van Soren, Coles received a terse message from one of his friends at Intel. It read simply: “KIA.”

Coles stewed. He’d invested a lot in that operation, and it had been pulled out from under him and botched. Right thoroughly botched – his deep-cover agent was dead, and Serenity’s crew, Coles guessed based upon the fact that their faces were all over the Cortex with the word “Wanted” underneath, was not in custody. Botched. By a Parliamentary operative. Coles fumed. For two days after the message from Intel, Coles could not focus past his anger.

Then one morning he woke with the memory fresh in his mind: he had not ordered Serenity’s pilot killed, but held. The man was still alive somewhere. And on the heels of that memory came a notion: perhaps he could accomplish what Parliament’s own operative had not. And what a career coup that would be.

Coles rose, dressed, and ordered an aide to ‘wave the local thug who had assisted him on Beaumonde.

**

It took longer than it should have for Coles to secure a ship to take him to Haven. No one was forthcoming as to why, but the implication seemed to be that pretty much every ship assigned to that quadrant had suffered enough damage to make them unsuitable for his purpose. Recently. Coles finally called

Comments
Sunday, 28 January 2007 23:05
Brilliant! Love Wash and how you have portrayed him. He might not think of himself as a Big Damn Hero but he is, just hope Mal and Co get to him before Coles gets his evil plan off the drawing board. Can't wait for the next part, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
DRKSTARLESSNIGHT
Monday, 29 January 2007 00:26
Awesome. I wonder how Wash is gonna react when he finds out that no one was able to tell the difference between the “real” and “fake” Wash. Not that it’s really any of their faults being that the “fake” Wash was brain washed and all. But it should serve for some good angst.
Monday, 29 January 2007 00:32
Hurrah I love how this is unfolding keep it up!
HORATIOFROG
Monday, 29 January 2007 03:09
Wow.

The coolest thing about this story is this: I can actually see Wash doing all of the things you have him do and saying the things you have him say. Of all the characters, I'm of the opinion that Wash is the hardest to write---and you're doing a brilliant job here.

I for one am now really really looking forward to the next few parts---our BDH needs a BDR of his own... :)
ASKERIAN
Monday, 29 January 2007 03:19
in the hands of a skilled pilot. And Wash just happened to know one of those.

XDDDD Good quote.

Figures it didn't work, though. He just isn't lucky like that. Not an action kind of guy, really. It was a good plan, oh well. ;.;

"Wash didn’t think in those terms. Wash thought largely in terms of Zoe"

Awww ;.; *squishes poor Wash*

"Honor among thieves? Coles marveled."

oh my. Is his view of the universe starting to quiver a bit?

Mmmh. Plot = good. Waiting for the next chapter. *__*
Monday, 29 January 2007 04:10
Oh...this was some mighty shiny work, nauticalgal! Between Wash's internal monologue during his prison transfer and his schtick to Commander Coles? I honestly thought I was reading an adaptation of something Joss had written for small or big screen:D

BEB
Thursday, 01 February 2007 05:59
So far, soooooooooooo shiny!
Saturday, 21 May 2011 21:00
Interesting. Alliance is still trying to decide what to do with him, but unfortunately, they haven't realized they set things right up for the crew to steal him back.

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