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THE RETRIBUTION SERIES: 3. "Desperate Times"

Saturday, January 27, 2007

"The Captain tries to track down his missing crew. Zoe and Wash discover that you never get anything for free."

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TITLE: "DESPERATE TIMES"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Z/W. S/K.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "HEROES AND VILLAINS".

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "The Captain tries to track down his missing

crew. Zoe and Wash discover that you never get anything

for free."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"DESPERATE TIMES"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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So tired he could hardly talk, Wash had difficulty keeping his eyes open. With a smirk on her lips Zoe snuggled in close and was about to join him in sleep when the light came on. Although it was dimmed Zoe squinted, rolling off her side of the bed into a defensive crouch on the floor. Wash did not stir. The girl immediately made placating sounds and waved her hands downward, not wanting to alarm the guests. Zoe just glared as she recognised her, clearly unamused.

"What the good gorram you doin' sneakin' into our room in the dead of night?"

The girl, Claudia, took a moment to find her voice. "*Duibuqi*, you will miss one of the things for which Raisa is famous."

Zoe wanted to shake the stupid out of the girl but something stayed her hand. Claudia's eyes were big, round and scared. Not simply by Zoe's reaction but by the fact that her clumsy handling of their guests could see her out on the street with no means of support. This was the best job she had ever had and she couldn't afford to mess it up. Trying not to twist her hands the girl's smile was almost a grimace, a plea, a beg for mercy and for Zoe to listen. Curiosity slowly stirred in the first mate's back brain. "What do you mean?"

Relaxing just a little the girl smiled. "*Qinq*, come and see."

Comments
Sunday, 28 January 2007 01:49
Iiiinteresting story, Amdobell. Will the preacher have to fall back on his older profession to extricate Jayne, Zoe and Wash?
And, for better or worse, Jayne is also "on the crew," so Mal won't let him get left.
Sunday, 28 January 2007 07:01
Oh...things are starting to get really interesting in the "Oh God, oh God!" way. And the guardians against the proposed outcome are unconscious for one reason or another:(

Still...great work here, AMDOBELL :D

BEB
Sunday, 28 January 2007 08:58
Hen hao, hen hao! Nice use of the Chinese. Interspersed well semantically. The english is right shiny as well. Very professional.
Monday, 29 January 2007 18:16
Yay! I'm really enjoying this story. I only enjoy the Reavers more than Niska, so this is a real treat. Your writing, the settings and dialogue are very true to form. Just waiting patiently for the next chapter (and Akira Hanimoto is really quite intriguing).
Monday, 29 January 2007 18:24
Oh, nicely done. River being somber and cryptic and happy and downright creepifying all at once. Liked it a lot! You've got Wash and Zoe down pretty good too. Looking forward to reading what happens next.

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