Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Wish I Was Somebody Else, 7/26

Friday, January 26, 2007

In this chapter, Wash makes himself useful to his captors, and feeds a stray cat. Can any good come of either?

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AN: I have been grinding away all week. I decided to take enough of a break to post the next chapter.

7. If Everything were All Right, We’d Be In Jail

Wash returned to the small bunker that served Balch and himself and a handful of the mine’s workers as office space, and was immediately accosted by the Foreman.

“Where you been, Professor?”

“Went out to the number three line,” Wash said, putting his datapad down on the small desk he’d been assigned. “I wanted to check the numbers for myself.”

Balch frowned, looking Wash up and down. “Number three line’s been giving me fits for months.”

“I bet,” Wash said. “According to my numbers, you’re using more fuel and producing a lot less ore on three than on either of the other two lines. I just wanted to make sure the numbers were accurate. I mean, they’re so far off, I thought maybe they were just recorded wrong.”

Balch turned back toward his office, motioning for Wash to follow. “Ain’t wrong. You sure you ought to be out in the sun so much?”

“Well, actually, they were wrong,” Wash said. “Actually, it’s worse than the numbers I was given. And if I’m going to check the numbers myself, I kind of have to go out in the sun. Is there ever anything but sun on this rock?”

Balch’s face fell at Wash’s information. He sat at his desk and rummaged through a drawer. “I don’t suppose you got any clever ideas for fixing the problem?” he said.

“Well,” Wash replied, “I don’t know a whole lot about machines, but they do run better when you put the fuel cells in right-way-round. So I fixed that much, at least.” He’d never been in Balch’s office; Balch always kept the door closed and locked. Not for the map of the mine that covered one wall, Wash guessed, and which was layered with so much grime as to be illegible; nor for the bookcase filled with machine parts, knickknacks and dusty mugs; nor even for Balch’s desk, which was nearly empty. Probably, Balch kept his office secured because of the broadwave console inst

Comments
EPM0001
Saturday, 27 January 2007 02:03
I'm glad to see another chapter...great story.
Saturday, 27 January 2007 04:21
Awww! When the crew comes to rescue
Wash, I hope they don't leave the kitty behind!
Saturday, 27 January 2007 06:50
Loved this, I could so see Wash acting like this and the making of the new friend with the cat was good. I just hope nobody tries to eat the cat if all they have to live off is protein bars! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ASKERIAN
Saturday, 27 January 2007 14:05
Uwah, kitty! So cute. And the reference to the first mechanic got a snicker out of me.

The whole beginning had me on the edge of my seat. Action! Suspense! Mmmh. *__*

And I agree with Empire. Serenity needs a cat, really she does. u.u
Saturday, 27 January 2007 14:35
I am LOVING this story...VERY well done!
DRKSTARLESSNIGHT
Saturday, 27 January 2007 15:32
Aww love the part with the Kitty.

Great story very convincing.
Saturday, 27 January 2007 20:59
Well now...gotta wonder if the mis-installed fuel cells were done that way on purpose? Who knows what dastardly plans could arise from a improperly installed part?

;)

And Serenity does need a pet...if only to help River start getting the rest of her mind back on an even keel:D

BEB
Saturday, 27 January 2007 21:42
This is great! Like the others I can really see Wash befriending a hungry cat. Can hardly wait for more! shiny!
Saturday, 21 May 2011 20:44
Yes. Kitty.

*Approbation*

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