Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

Wish I Was Somebody Else, ch. 5/26

Friday, January 19, 2007

Jayne tracks down an important clue; Kaylee picks up another.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4600    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: I told myself that if five people commented on chapter 4, I'd go ahead and post chapter 5. When I checked this morning, there were six comments, so I felt shiny and happy and unearthed chapter 5 for y'all. Here it is:

5. You're a very "up" person.

After Miranda

Jayne and Kaylee obviously had to go; Zoe obviously could not be denied the opportunity to go; River might prove to be useful; and Mal was not about to be left behind. So they landed Serenity on Beaumonde under an alias, and left the ship in the care of Inara and Simon while the five of them trooped off together to the scrapyard where Wash – the real Wash – had last been seen. The attendant was not the same person who’d been there the day Wash disappeared, but the Firefly was still on the lot.

Jayne led them – or, rather, they followed in his wake – back through the scrapyard toward the Firefly, which they could just see through the forest of derelict hulls. Jayne moved quickly, with his eyes to the ground, which was a thin skim of gravel laid over packed earth. In places, the gravel was worn bare, and the tracks of men and small vehicles were visible there. Every so often, Jayne would squat to examine something on the ground, picking up small rocks or clumps of dirt and sniffing them, but only River had any idea what Jayne was seeing.

When they reached the Firefly, Jayne held up a hand to forestall them. “If there’s anything left here to find, I don’t want you trampling it,” he said. “Wait here.”

He disappeared around the Firefly as they stood waiting. They heard the airlock door creak open, but nothing more.

Zoe touched Mal’s arm, and he looked where she indicated. Kaylee had wandered off, and was standing underneath the bulbous stern of the ship, looking intently upward.

Mal walked over and stood next to her. “See something?” he asked.

“She ain’t burned up,” Kaylee said.

“Hmm?”

“She ain’t burned up.” Kaylee pointed upward. “They told us she burned up her accelerator core.

Comments
EPM0001
Friday, 19 January 2007 14:40
So now your going to withhold more chapters unless we review. No fair!!! I really liked this. Your writing is wonderful. Can we have more please?!
Friday, 19 January 2007 15:28
I second the above!!
Friday, 19 January 2007 17:45
It's just keeps getting more and more thrilling! I'm totally engrossed! Jayne is AWESOME with his mad tracking skillz! LOL
Friday, 19 January 2007 19:36
LOL It's not a matter of withholding, it's more a matter of not wanting to bother unless people are actually reading the thing.

Thanks!
HORATIOFROG
Friday, 19 January 2007 20:51
What?!?

No no no no no....see, now I *need* to know how this story plays out. It's no longer a *want*...
Friday, 19 January 2007 22:06
We need posts and stat, nauticalgal! You can't leave us hanging like this!

MORE!

BEB
Friday, 19 January 2007 22:47
I love seeing Jayne in his element. People rarely if ever give him credit, but he is supposed to be an expert tracker and I'm glad you let that shine through!

Also, loved that Kaylee was able to unearth some clues on her own. Something tells me the information about the ship not being burned up will be important eventually.
Saturday, 20 January 2007 01:14
Really good to see our Heroes taking such pains to find the real Wash and I just loved Jayne doing his tracking and showing how professional he is when it comes to one of his skills. I just hope they get to Wash soon, don't like him being in that hole waiting for some faceless bad guy to decide it is his time to die. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 21 May 2011 20:37
Very nice use of Jayne, also impressed at their detective work. Alliance may have covered their trail well, but the locals didn't. Lucky break.

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