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THE RETRIBUTION SERIES: 1. "A Step Into a Wider 'Verse"

Thursday, January 11, 2007

"With coin in their pockets from the last job the crew are determined to make the best of their stopover on New Tokyo. A new face brings a mix of conflicting emotions and the sense that something unpleasant is waiting in the wings."

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TITLE: "A STEP INTO A WIDER 'VERSE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: First in the RETRIBUTION SERIES.

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "With coin in their pockets from the last job

the crew are determined to make the best of their stopover

on New Tokyo. A new face brings a mix of conflicting emotions

and the sense that something unpleasant is waiting in the wings."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"A STEP INTO A WIDER 'VERSE"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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New Tokyo was a generous mix of the very old and the very new, like many of the terraformed worlds it had no identity of its' own. The conglomeration of cultures and periods meshed into something beyond cosmopolitan but with enough mutual points of reference to be familiar to the wide mix of races calling the place home. Kaylee was so excited she could barely speak coherently. Smiling, Inara informed her friend that one of the many things New Tokyo was famous for was its' markets. Kaylee's eyes widened even further, a fever of excitement barely contained behind eyes that shone.

"I hear they got everythin' ya can think of, 'Nara. If ya can't buy it in New Tokyo it don't exist!"

Inara continued brushing Kaylee's hair for a moment or two. "That may be something of an exaggeration, *mei mei*, but I don't think you'll be disappointed."

The girl was bouncing so much that Inara had to stop brushing. "We won't be landing for another hour, Kaylee. I thought you wanted to look your best for Simon?" She teased.

"*Duibuqi*, 'Nara, just I get so excited seein' new places, meetin' new folk an' all."

"Did the Captain sa

Comments
Thursday, 11 January 2007 20:59
This story is set at the end of the series but before the BDM. Hope you folks enjoy it, if so don't be shy and leave a comment. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 11 January 2007 22:25
Oh wow Jayne in Niska's claws, I am like totally interested and want more of this story soon. I love Jayne in danger stories...hell I love Jayne lol. More soon please
Friday, 12 January 2007 05:11
I've never been lucky enough to catch one of your stories at the beginning, I'll try to keep up with this one :) It's an intriguing start; Niska's always good for a hair-raising story. Jayne being the crew member I'm least fond of, it'll be interesting to see how this plays out. Him getting snathched should bring up some interesting studies in loyalty among the crew!
Friday, 12 January 2007 21:06
Oh, this should be good! I like how you write Jayne, and this ought to raise some good questions.
And this:
"The sweet smile she turned on Mal was like a shiny exotic blade dipped in a poison so discreet it could be mistaken for honey." - nice!
READOUT
Sunday, 14 January 2007 23:20
I liked the way you used all the firefly terms here, such as "morbid and creepyfying." Yay for Captin-y things!
Monday, 15 January 2007 02:25
Ooh...this ain't good. Definitely not good at all:(

Still...great opening gambit, AMDOBELL! Loved what you did here and I can't wait to see how Jayne's capture is going to affect the crew;)

BEB
Monday, 31 March 2008 09:11
just re-read this - still holds up nicely, your patented lean prose and you nailed niska pretty much too:)

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