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Knotted

Wednesday, January 10, 2007

Shortly after War Stories, Zoe catches Wash looking at job listings on the Cortex. Is he planning to leave -- without telling her? Without *her*?

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Title: Knotted

Author: nauticalgal

Pairings: Zoe/Wash

Rating: PG

Timeline/Spoilers: Shortly after War Stories

Disclaimer: Not my toys, but fun to play with

Note: Written for the Zoe/Wash ficathon on livejournal. stormkpr requested either a fic shortly after War Stories or Our Mrs. Reynolds, or a fic in which either Wash or Zoe feels insecure, and is comforted by the other. So naturally, I thought I'd go for the trifecta. Shortly after War Stories, and there's plenty of insecurity to go around:

Zoe walked up the steps from the foredeck corridor onto Serenity's bridge, a still-warm plate in one hand and a mug of fresh coffee in the other. Wash hated it when he had to work right through meals, but it was part of his job description sometimes, and she tried to smooth that over for him by bringing him something to eat, and keeping him company. Especially now, when the demons were still fresh.

He was looking at something on the Cortex when she came into the cramped space, but cleared the screen quickly when he heard her footsteps.

Not quite quickly enough.

"Hey, bao bei," he said, turning to greet her, and she forced a smile and handed him the plate and cup. He smiled back and said, "Thanks."

Zoe settled herself against the pilot's console. Wash set his mug up above his instruments, and picked up the fork from his plate. He pushed the food around, frowning at it. "I see it's our very best five-star fare, tonight," he observed unhappily.

"It was my night to cook," she reminded him, and he winced. He hadn't mean't to insult her. Still.

"Um, like I said," he amended, changing his tone, "five star fare!" He scooped up a mouthful, "Wow! This has to be the best meal I've had all week!" Zoe's expression didn't change, and he gave it up. He laid the fork down and put a hand on her leg, smiling hopefully. Contrite. Convincingly sincere.

Zoe tossed her head at the blank screen. "More job listings?" she asked, and saw her husband wince again. Did he think she di

Comments
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 14:10
Beautiful piece.

I love the utter delicacy of the tension, and the whispers of philosophical questions and deeper meaning that can only be answered by how we choose to live our lives.
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 18:00
I don't often read Wash/Zoe, but I absolutely adored this. I think you captured a very interesting and truthsome moment that could have taken place within the 'verse.

Shiny!
Wednesday, 10 January 2007 22:56
Utterly awesome! I adored every single line, it was so true to how I could imagine Wash feeling and Zoe reacting. Just love how you also brought them full circle and back to Serenity. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 12 January 2007 23:56
That was really good. I got a little lump in my throat.
Saturday, 13 January 2007 03:29
Definitely a wonderful piece of work, nauticalgal! Really gotta give you props for realistically dealing with Wash going through some moments of contemplation about a life not on Serenity:)

BEB
Saturday, 13 January 2007 03:41
Thanks, everyone! Fanfic writers work for comments, and I consider myself well paid for this piece!
Monday, 15 January 2007 12:50
Wow, that was a wonderful story! I like reading about Wash and how his more sensitive nature would have dealt with the aftermath of his visit with Niska, and you did it beautifully. I loved the exploration of their relationship and even their lives.

Favorite bits:

It would have been her, if they hadn't fought; if she'd insisted on going -- it would have been her in Niska's torture chamber, and Zoe knew she would far rather have taken those wounds herself than to see them inflicted on her lover. What if Wash felt the same way? What if the risk of it was too much for him to take?


"It wasn't me," she protested, and tears welled up in her eyes. She forced them back angrily. "Wash, it wasn't me."


"Not this time," he said. But what about next time? And the time after that? He didn't need to say it.


"Then I'd --" she swallowed. That damn lump. "I'd need you. My cavalry." She leaned away, enough to look in his eyes. "Every soldier knows you can't win without cavalry."

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