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The Children of Shadow, Ch. 2

Monday, January 8, 2007

Post-BDM Mal meets up with his long lost girlfriend from Shadow. Love triangle between Mal/Inara/OC.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3208    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Its up a week and a half later than I said, but its finally done.

Since this is my first Firefly fanfic, please comment so I know what I'm doing right.

What Joss created is his and the rest is mine.

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Chapter 2: Where the Past Meets the Present

Inara was confused. One moment Mal was leaning in to kiss her, and the next moment he was walking across the room to talk to another woman. She quietly fumed a bit until she saw the way they stood there and talked to each other. Mal smiled at the mysterious woman and hugged her the way old acquaintances greet each other after long partings. Inara started to make her way across the room.

“I heard that you captain a Firefly now. Serenity , right?” Inara heard from the woman as she came closer to the two people.

“Yeah! Funny, you’ve heard about me, but I haven’t heard an utterance of you. I thought you… ” Mal trailed off.

A forlorn look came across the woman’s face. “Yeah,” she said quietly. “Well, I’ve spent most of my time confined to small circles.”

“Hello,” said Inara stepping beside him.

Mal turned to the companion. “Oh, Inara. This is Annaleigh Men, we grew up together on Shadow. Annaleigh this is Inara Serra, she used to rent a shuttle from me.”

“Nice to meet you,” said Annaleigh, holding a hand out to Inara smiling.

“You too,” she said warmly, shaking Annaleigh’s hand. Annaleigh’s shake was firm. Her hand felt calloused, but the nails were trimmed and manicured.

“I was just about to tell him that I heard about his little run-in with Adelai Niska,” said Annaleigh. “I can’t believe you escaped the clutches of that maniac. How did you manage to pull that off?”

“I sweet-talked him.”

“Haha! Right! Did he treat you to dinner and a movie?”

“No, he reenacted the works of Shan Yu.”

“How charming! Was there a volcano?”

He laughed. “No, but he did cut off my ear. That didn’t make my crew very happy.”

“Cut off your ear? I see two perfectly

Comments
Monday, 08 January 2007 18:14
I was loving this up until realising that Annaleigh was not only working for Mal'e enemy, the Alliance, but ready to betray her friend and give up River and Simon to the bad guys. I'm thinking Zoe will smell a rat, she already spotted the boots and was on her guard while Mal just swallowed the thin tale Annaleigh gave him to account for having them on her feet. I was disappointed with Inara's initial reaction, she is smarter than that and I would have expected her to hide her reaction to possible competition and find out as much about Annaleigh as possible before getting all uppity and talking of leaving (again). Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 03:35
Interesting turn of events, I must say. Mal's gonna feel really crappy when he discovers the truth...presumably after he and Inara have had a fight where Inara slangs Annaleigh and Mal defends her:(

Gotta say though...Inara's observation of the Alliance jump boots was a brilliant move, since it's an important piece of information...but unlike Zoe, we're not really sure how to take Inara's discovery. Should we automatically think "setup" and eagerly wait Annaleigh's comeuppance, or is she what she seems and she just has a pair of stolen Purplebelly combat boots?

For me, in hindsight, the realization Annaleigh's not all she says was her recognition of Saffron and how she's able to offer up what is presumably the Alliance law enforcement alias for Saffron...something only a Fed or someone with access to law enforcement records could know;)

BEB
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 15:36
That whore!
Kill her off.

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