Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Tempted by the Fruit of Another - HARD R

Tuesday, January 2, 2007

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AN: This is my one and only attempt at a bit of serious M/R. Just to see if I can make it work. Don't faint.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2377    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Girl was too young, too dangerous, too broken.

Too many things that Mal knew to be all manner of wrong and improper.

Also far too tempting. A summer peach just about to turn ripe, or one of Kaylee's prized, plump red strawberries. And the Sweet Jesus have mercy on his Special Hell-bound soul for it, but he ached to be the first one to taste her.

Little witch prolly knew it too, and was out to torment him for it. Sending him visions in his sleep he ought not to be having. Her riding him like a bronco. Him bending her over the catwalk railing, lifting that flirty, pink little skirt of hers and taking her with his pants around his ankles. Her kneeling in front of him as he sat in the pilot's chair and taking him in her mouth.

When Mal was a boy, there was a big peach tree on the ranch.

Somehow, the sweetest fruit off that tree was just out of his reach.

Comments
SALEG
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 06:55
Wow. You made it work but... oh, so short. Little detail but very poetical. The forbidden fruit aspecy is just... Wow. 6 paragraphs and oh so dirty.
Tuesday, 02 January 2007 10:20
Oooh, naughty River teasing the Captain with images that will surely send him to each one of the Shepherd's Special Hells if he so much as thinks of acting on those lustful feelings. No wonder the poor man never sleeps. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 04 January 2007 06:11
Well...all I can say is a resounding "GUH!!!" and beg ya for more of this, WhosThatGirl. Cuz it was brilliance in it's implied sexual gratuity and angst, I must say ;D

BEB
JEMMA
Tuesday, 09 January 2007 16:22
....*pout*....too short! please try to write more

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