Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
chaos
Sunday, December 24, 2006
first time heres a poem of sorts not sure how well it is but i like it
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 2013 RATING: 8.0 (G) SERIES: FIREFLY
Chaos echos through my mind and heart
voices not my own crys from the past
cant escape the tides of darkness
cant find my light to guide me
trapped in the past an observer in the present
as i am enclosed in darkness
the figure emerges
and my light begins to shine.
and the voices are quite.
Comments
Sunday, 24 December 2006 05:07
Kinda like it though it isn't mine!
None too shabby, apollo231. Be nicer if it was longer (wouldn't everything?), but as it is, it's fitting well within itself.
Now I'm off to watch Die Hard, aka The perfect Christmas film.
None too shabby, apollo231. Be nicer if it was longer (wouldn't everything?), but as it is, it's fitting well within itself.
Now I'm off to watch Die Hard, aka The perfect Christmas film.
Wednesday, 27 December 2006 17:08
Hmm...spelling could do with a bit of work, but great stuff in any case:D
BEB
BEB
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