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THE PURSUIT SERIES: 18. "Help Unlooked For"

Friday, December 22, 2006

"In the aftermath of the Dreadnought's destruction Inara is surprised to find help closer at hand than she dreamt. Meanwhile Book suggests a solution to the Captain that is all manner of creepifying."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3953    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "HELP UNLOOKED FOR"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "SYMMETRY"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "In the aftermath of the Dreadnought's destruction

Inara is surprised to find help closer at hand than she dreamt.

Meanwhile Book suggests a solution to the Captain that is all

manner of creepifying."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"HELP UNLOOKED FOR"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

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Senator William Lang stared at the impossible made flesh. Not a word escaped the strangled barely articulate gurgle of emotion. He looked distraught, frozen in shock. Inara made herself turn her head and look at the screen. Her eyes widened, surprised and stunned by what she was seeing. It was the last thing she had expected and had her heart leaping in her breast, a cry of triumphant joy smothered by sheer force of will. To lose her composure now would be an error she might not survive.

The plume of debris as the flash flared across the Black was like a sheet of lightening but far more powerful and no longer than a fraction of a second in duration. The flash doused by vacuum almost the instant it had formed. A brief taste of hellfire yet it wrought such terrible destruction in its' wake. Their vessel rocked then the lights flickered and went out as if it was a candle with the wick snuffed. That quick. The men scrambled in their frantic efforts to bring their equipment back on line. Nothing worked. But at least the small sleek ship was still intact albeit without power. The huge blocky presence of the Alliance dreadnought had shielded them but there was nothing so benign to shie

Comments
Saturday, 23 December 2006 07:25
Where do you find all the Chinese phrases you use here??? I'd love to do a fanfic myself, but I'm wondering if I can do it without the Chinese! Do you have a dictionary, or do you speak it yourself? Your writing is fantastic!
Saturday, 23 December 2006 10:48
Avalonsmummy, thanks for the shiny feedback - made my Christmas! As for the Chinese I do speak some Mandarin from when I was in China some years back but I also have several Mandarin dictionaries. There are a number of resources on the net, places like the Firefly Chinese Pinyinary which has now moved to http://fireflychinese.kevinsullivansite.net
If you are thinking of writing fanfic yourself it might help if you got a pad and started jotting down the words and phrases you like from other people's fanfic along with their meanings. You will be amazed how quickly you start to pick it up. Don't be put off by the way some people spell the same words differently, I always use Pinyin, some spell the words as they sound. Look forward to reading something of yours! Good luck. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 01 January 2007 01:54
I had a comment here...but it's gone. Poo:(

Still...mighty brilliant work here, AMDOBELL! Definitely gotta love the Senator's comeuppance with seeing the Alliance ship go 'blooey and have the rescue force storm his ship before he got shot;)

BEB

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