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ACT FOUR
Ext – Serenity on the ground – Persephone.
Camera swings around to reveal the cargo doors open. Rhampal and Mal are standing on the ramp.
Rhampal
Gonna cut you free now. You, me and the pilot are gonna make the drop. Wingnut and Moira are gonna stay on board with your mechanic to make sure it all goes smooth.
Mal
Smooth is good.
Wingnut appears with River and his knife. He cuts Mal free – two quick slashes. He steps back to say something to Rhampal, giving River and Mal a moment.
Mal
First chance you get, you use that unarmed combat thing you got going to take these guys down.
River
(Giving him a look) Well, now you tell me.
Mal looks more than a smidgen crestfallen as Rhampal walks up.
Rhampal
Let’s go.
The three of them walk down the ramp and out into the world.
Reverse angle – a truck is approaching; it stops and men disembark – one obvious leader and some flunkies. They start to unload some heavy lifting gear, while the boss, Tzu, a very large man, approaches Mal.
Mal
Dr Tzu, it’s good to see you again. That diet’s doin’ the business. I swear you musta lost at least 60 pounds.
Tzu
(laughingly) 47. I think I must have given it to you. You’re started to look a little chunky.
Mal
I know it. My problem is that every time I sleep with your wife she gives me a cookie.
Angle on Rhampal – he can’t believe this banter.
Tzu
Don’t I know it? She does like a man who doesn’t need room in the front of his pants.
Mal
Ouch. That was below the belt.
Tzu
Kinda the point, Mal.
Mal
See that’s probably my tragic flaw. I thought the point was you gi
My intention in writing this was to "pilot a new season." Consequently, I've tried to throw as many conflicts and complications into the air as I can: pregnancy and a rival for Zoe, trouble for Kaylee and Simon, how Inara killed Declan and why oesn't she want to go to Sihnon, which is really why she left in the first place.
However, the frustration of formatting has ensured that I won't be writing the next episode any time soon, if at all.
If anyone feels the desire to investigate any of these ideas - help yourself. I have no sense of ownership of Joss' people or setting.
So Inara's got some crazy designer virus in her system or something then? Cuz I can't really see how Declan could die that fast when Inara has not seemingly had the time to take anything that would get spread to a sexual partner...and I would expect the Buccaner's crew would have searched Inara after getting aboard...
BEB
Shiny ^^
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