Blue Sun Room FICTION - ADVENTURE

The Legacy of Uncle Jack, ch. 9/11

Saturday, December 2, 2006

In this installment: Zoe meets her in-laws at last. Earlier, Zoe decides she has finally met her match.

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Pressing on to the bitter end, despite the fact that no one but Blue-Eyed Brigadier is even reading this thing. *sigh*.

Chapter 9

The windows along the east wall of the founder's hall shattered inward, breaking into a rain of safety glass pellets that cascaded like a wave into the room, or down to the street below. People screamed; they fell; they ran in all directions -- or they froze, transfixed, staring at the gaping hole that had been light-sensitive glass separating them from a three-story fall.

In that instant, only a few people in the room moved with deliberate intent. Some of the Alliance officers drew their weapons and began ordering the people around them onto the floor. Others of that group dropped to the floor, watchful.

Mal flipped his table up on its side, scattering Kaylee's strawberries, just before he grabbed her and pulled her down behind it. She stared at him, wide-eyed, as he pulled his pistol and glanced quickly around the edge of the upturned table.

Zoe also flipped up a table, the one she was closest to, and pulled Wash's mother and sister down behind it with her. She tried to draw her own weapon, but was prevented by Wash's mother clinging to her arm, wide-eyed with terror. Tim dropped down behind his wife. Wash's father stood unsteadily in his walker, staring at the shattered windows.

Wash had already been on his stomach when the windows exploded; after a split second's surprise, he started belly-crawling toward his father.

Before he could get there, two dozen black-clad commandos on ropes rappelled down to the open wall and swung themselves into the room. More commandos swarmed in from the hallway to the west of the founder's hall. Another group entered from the kitchen doors, behind the buffet tables at the south end.

The attendees found themselves surrounded on three sides by armed soldiers.

Mal, confronted directly by a commando with a semiautomatic rifle, dropped his pistol and put his hands in the air.

One of the Alliance officers st

Comments
Saturday, 02 December 2006 22:28
I read cuz I care...and due to the fact I am loving what you're doing here, nauticalgal! And don't let the feedback drought get ya down...never know when one's genius will be finally appreciated;D

And I definitely loved how Zoe's seeing the reality of Wash (in the flashback) concering his courage, piloting skills and businesss savvy. Though I do hope Chapter 10 finally sees Zoe come clean and start her relationship with Wash;)

BEB
Sunday, 03 December 2006 02:24
Nautigal, Thanks for filling in some of the gaps in the world of WashnZoe. I especially like the liked Zoe's "what-ifs" about Wash and the shower.

Kep Flyin',

K
ANKH
Sunday, 03 December 2006 14:08
I've been reading fics from this site for ages but never really found the time to register. Finally have, so now i can let all the authors of my fave fics how great their stories are.
Been following this one from the start and i love every chapter. I especially like the way you've managed to link the two different times together, and how zoe and wash first perceive each other.

Ankh

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