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The Temptress and The Hunter: Part 4-The Hideout

Wednesday, November 29, 2006

Dorm goes to The Blade’s hideout and begins to rack up those he suspects of being Saffron. The Blade’s haze the new guy. An awful truth is revealed.
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The heart of the jungle was dense and dark, vines and creepers hanging down on all sides of the narrow path. The four horses trotted along quickly in a tight line. Dorm Harkaway, today Dorm Rendell; newest member of Blake’s Blades held tightly onto the handle of his six-shooter as he rode. It was in jungle like this that that he had been attacked by those savage half-men Degens. He’d never considered himself a coward, someone who was afraid when there was no need to be and could not conquer that fear, but right now he was frightened. It certainly wasn’t cowardice, cowards didn’t survive thirteen years in the army and six as an undercover agent, and besides his fear was more than justified. His last encounter with Degens had seen a woman rent sunder before his very eyes. He wasn’t exactly looking forward to seeing that again, or to being the next one to have his throat eaten.

He tried not to think about it, while at the same time neither relaxing or letting down his guard. He was in The Blades, they had done the job, Ceran had accepted him and every second he drew closer to Saffron. There was a lot to be content about, but it never paid to be content. Being content led to being relaxed and being relaxed led to being dead. And Dorm had never fancied being dead.

Suddenly the jungle gave way to a huge grey building, overgrown with creepers and plants. Dorm started and drew his horse to a halt, tugging back sharply on the reigns. Behind him the two fistmen, Jon and Philip, stopped with curses and irritated noises.

Ceran turned and grinned back at them, “Impressive, ain’t it? Welcome to the Hideout - we hope your stay here is a pleasant one.”

Dorm laughed in amazement and followed Ceran as she rode towards the front of the building. He had had no ides this was out here so this came as something as a shock. He’d studied maps of the area for hours and never seen anything like this on any of them. It wasn’t as though a building this size could be easily over looked. There were other abandoned buildings in th

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Wednesday, 29 November 2006 07:44
Ok just a few notes.
One-In case you where wondering (or couldn't understand a word of it) Pat Doonicon has an Irish accent-If you say his lines in an Irish accent you can understand them.

Two-I need to know if i'm going to slow with this EG-should i Post more often or simple speed up the pace of the story.

Anyways enjoy, play England/America whenever possible and don't ever let the signal be stopped.
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 07:45
Ok just a few notes.
One-In case you where wondering (or couldn't understand a word of it) Pat Doonicon has an Irish accent-If you say his lines in an Irish accent you can understand them.

Two-I need to know if I'm going too slow with this EG-should I post more often or simply speed up the pace of the story?

Anyways enjoy, play England/America whenever possible and don't ever let the signal be stopped.
Thursday, 30 November 2006 02:20
Honestly, I think the posting schedule is a bit to quick, but then again, I am a few chapters behind in getting caught up when I have a momen't leisure;)

BEB
Friday, 08 December 2006 10:49
Stormwind, in reply to your wave about helping out on the project I will have to politely decline. Too many calls on my time to participate. All the best, Keep flyin' - Ali D
You can't take the sky from me

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