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Legacy 3:06, Confederation, Part 2

Tuesday, November 28, 2006

Legacy's crew is scattered across a city soon to be embroiled in a full-scale war, and time is running out before the bombs fall. In the sky, two of the greatest military minds clash, while on the ground, the best the crew can hope for is to not be crushed under foot.

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God damn, this is getting long. I swear, I had every intention of wrapping things up in Part 2, but I just kept on coming up with things that needed to be said, things that needed to be done, and eventually it got so long I had to cut it off again. I swear, Part three will be the last one. Really. Pinky-swear.

In Part 2, we're actually introduced to a character hinted at in the last season's finale, a man known as The Sorceror. He becomes a recurring character, and is a fine foil to Logan Kell. As well, we learn why the Browncoats (or Confederates, as they are now properly called) stand a fighting chance against the Unioners (or Waps, as the derogation goes). As well, more people suddenly going crazy, and no, Anne's baby isn't born yet. Finally, we learn a little bit about the woman occasionally known as Saffron.

The language warning is still in effect, so don't read this if you have unstained, virgin ears. Although, why you'd come here if you actually had virgin ears is a concern for a different time...

Malcolm Reynolds, Serenity, and the 'Verse are property of Joss and Co., but the War blazin' through it is all mine.

Feedback is ammo. Reload me.

Confederation, Part 2

Logan threw himself onto the bed, kicking off his boots as he stared up at the cieling. Things had gotten away from him, dangerously away. They'd gotten soft, complacent with their morals. They'd made him a liar, and the six hours he'd had with them might have put the fear of God into them, but he knew that they were a far cry from the crew he'd left when he went onto the New Shadow.

He tried to will himself to sleep, but it was about as effective as he expected it would be, and he eventually just sat up, running his nails through his recently mutilated beard. Night was always the hardest time for him to sleep. Of course, he could have just reset the ship's clocks, but that'd bend the crew up, and it was better that he suffer than everybody but him. Hell, it was just common rutting sense.

He had just decided to grab a book to

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Wednesday, 29 November 2006 01:57
Ya know...in all this briliant craziness, it's Sylvia's words to Jacob that really hit. And not for the right reasons:(

Last time I checked, Jacob was married and about to become a father. Now's not the time to be subtly declaring one's love and future relations with said married man and father-to-be. Cuz I am presuming something crappy is gonna happen to Anne so that Sylvia can eventually step in:(

Still...this entire chapter was freaking amazing, JTD! Was stuck between shock and amazement - Saffron was a sweet little girl?!? - and pure horror at some of the fei hua you're willing to fling about for the sake of a story:D

BEB

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