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Precious Commodity - Ch 4/? - Flying Without Wings

Tuesday, November 28, 2006

J/R; M/I romance: Mal finally discovers the lengths Inara will go to in order to protect his crew while he is too ill to do so himself. Jayne finds out why River would rather die than go back to the Accadamy.**Please note the change in rating** Chapters are linked for reading ease.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3438    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Rating - R - Please note rating change

Disclaimer: It all belongs to Joss.

Beta: TamSibling

Pairings: J/R; M/I

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Precious Commodity

By Lattelady

Ch. 4 Flying Without Wings

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River skidded to a stop in the corridor ten feet from the entrance to the main lounge. With her head tilted she concentrated all her efforts on listening and feeling. She could hear Jayne’s deep masculine voice very near and he was clearly distressed. There was another person present, who spoke in hushed tones, which made it impossible for the girl to identify who it was.

Survival instinct sent her shivering back against the bulkhead. Her brain didn’t have to tell her fingers to disengage the safety on her gun. They did it of their own accord. Moving with stealth, she sniffed the air as she crept along until she was almost to the door. Jayne’s tone carried a message of danger, but her mind couldn’t feel any in the immediate area or near future. Self preservation won out as she readied for action. Seconds later she sprang and landed in a crouch, ready to fire at the unknown person who had dared come aboard Serenity uninvited.

“Easy there, girl,” Jayne called out as he quickly grabbed her wrist pointing her gun hand toward the deck. “It’s just Inara, come for a visit.” He wrestled the weapon from her fingers and glared at her. “And I thought I told ya to keep the damn safety on this thing!”

“Give me back my gun.” River shook with anger and embarrassment.

“You’ll get it back when it’s just you and me on this here boat.” He stuck the pistol in the back of his belt and dared her to challenge him. “I don’t want no accidents while we got company.”

“I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to frighten you.” The Companion stepped between the glaring pair. It was apparent the

Comments
Tuesday, 28 November 2006 04:50
Yay for some Rayne lovin'!

And I absolutely adored the Mal/Inara moment in the tent. So much pride and passion is between those two, but my favorite moment is when Mal apologizes to Inara for her having to take care of Wash. Just heart-breaking!
Tuesday, 28 November 2006 06:07
Oh....this was freaking spectacular, Lattelady6! Even the second time around (since I read this part over at Copper For a Kiss & your LJ site first), this hit me hard in all kinds of ways:D

Honestly, River and Jayne's first intimate moment and the Mal/Inara med-tent confrontation & confession are vying for top spot of "Most Shiny Moments in the Chapter" list...and for different reasons. Mal and Inara's moment is powerful because we have them seemingly fall back on old habits when they're scared and confused but managing to fight their way to finally breaking down their defenses so they can start healing one another. Rayne's moment is just freaking unbelievable cuz it's totally in line with the characters and how they would deal with the fact River's subliminal command structure is based on Pavlovian response to sexual stimuli and it has now been countermanded by them showing each other true physical and emotional fusion.

Definitely can't wait for the second part of Chapter 4, and all of Chapters 5 & 6 to get posted...cuz those ones put this chapter to shame:D

BEB
Tuesday, 28 November 2006 06:09
Oh...and I think you could post the NC-17 version of this here. Last time I checked, the BSR isn't quite as...anal about sex and violence like FanFiction.net or other archives;)

BEB
Wednesday, 29 November 2006 10:54
Brillant
Saturday, 02 December 2006 21:18
This is awesome! More please. And soon. I think I'm addicted...

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