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Precious Commodity - Ch 1/? Echoes

Friday, November 24, 2006

Pairings are Jayne/River, Mal/Inara, and some Simon/Kaylee. Hours after Miranda, a blood spattered and frightened River keeps watch over the wounded crew in an Alliance Med-Tent, until she is helped by Jayne. Ratings will change with chapters as needed. **Chapters linked for easy navigation**

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Disclaimer: They belong to Joss. I just want to let them out to play and make them happy.

Rating: Pg-13

Pairing: R/J; M/I; S/K

Time period/Spoilers: Post BDM

Notes: This little story had been sitting on my desktop, only 3 pages long until I did the music video ‘River In The Wings’. It inspired me, thank goodness. Two paragraphs of this story dovetail with my Mal/Inara story ‘Walking With The Dead’.

Beta: TamSibling

Enjoy!

Precious Commodity

By

Lattelady6

Ch 1 Echoes

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Lawrence Dobson, Alliance mole said to Jayne Cobb, mercenary, in ‘Serenity’ the ‘Firefly’ pilot – “That girl is a precious commodity. They’ll come after her.”

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1 year later:

Jayne Cobb fought the need for sleep and the throb of pain in his shoulder. He was the hired gun, the muscle, so it was his job to watch over the others. The med tent the Alliance had set up for the wounded crew of Serenity was small, dark and drafty. The Tech who had been assigned to tend their wounds and see to it that they survived the night, sat comfortably in a small attached tent, with the only warming unit turned on high. It had been the Operative’s order that these people live and the Medic had done all he could for them surgically, but he wasn’t going to share his only means of warmth with a boatload of scum his friends had been trying to kill hours earlier.

The sound of someone entering their tent put Jayne on the alert. Vigilance had kept him alive for years and bein’ in the gorramn care of the Alliance just made him plum twitchy. He could tell by the quiet movements that it wasn’t the heavy-footed medic. A stench of blood tickled his nose and ran along his senses. It sent his hand quietly searching for Vera, only to come up empty.

The big mercenary carefully peeked through a screen of lashes. It was a trick he’d learned long ago and one that had saved his life on more t

Comments
Friday, 24 November 2006 09:39
I really liked this and you have done a fabulous job with River. Especially her fear about being taken back and Jayne making her realise she isn't alone and that he and the rest of the crew would fight for her. I smiled at Inara giving in and lying down with Mal and Jayne's thoughts that if only they did that when they were awake it would be quiet on Serenity. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 24 November 2006 19:02
Does this mean we're gonna see the completion of this tale...cuz I have been waiting anxiously to see a continuation of this fabulous story since I first came across it at Copper For a Kiss (I think...or was it FanFiction.net? Hmm...)!

:D

Definitely loving how both Jayne and River are coming to some rather frightening conclusions about what they and the rest of the crew mean to each other! Really can't wait to see part 2;)

BEB
Saturday, 25 November 2006 17:02
You know I love this, but I'll say it again.

I really loved the scene in the med tent with River trying to soothe them all. And I love your insight into Inara which I know is only going to grow with subsequent chapters.

And in a way, I feel bad for Jayne (oh god, did I just write that?) He is a fairly simple man who only wants to protect those closest to him. I can imagine his new feelings for River throw that into a whole new conflicting state.

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