Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Undiscovered Country

Thursday, November 16, 2006

Belongs to somebody not me. Blah blah blah. Yackety, schmackety.
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Title comes from <i>Hamlet</i>. There. Consider yourself edumacated.
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CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2207    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He'd overslept. Overslept on a sea of satin sheets, with his body wrapped around a fallen angel.

Worse ways to wake up, Mal supposed.

It had finally happened. He and Inara had finally taken the tumble together. Several times over, even. It was more than he'd imagined it would be, and he'd worked up a pretty vivid imagination when it came to her.

He had himself a dim recollection that at one particular high point, that pesky L-word mighta slipped out of his mouth. Not that he didn't actually mean it, but more that he wasn't sure he was ready for it to be out in the open.

It was undiscovered country for him.

Her lashes fluttered open. She looked at him, a bit afraid that he would bolt.

"You're here?"

A question, rather than a statement. As though she was surprised he'd stayed the night. Did any of her clients actually stay the night, unless they'd bought her for an entire weekend?

"Where else would I be, darlin'?"

"I thought...you'd have things to do. Captain-y things."

"Well, I suppose there prolly are. But Zoe or Kaylee ain't hollerin' for me at this very instant, so I don't see any reason not to be here."

She blushed, and Mal grinned, knowing just how far down that blush actually went.

"Mal, I wouldn't blame you if..."

He frowned.

"If I just up and left? Like all your other fancy gents? Tossed some coin on the table, buttoned up my pants and went on my merry. Because if that's what you want, Inara, I think I hear Zoe hollerin'."

She huddled in the bed, hugging her knees.

"That's not what I want." Whispering so soft, he almost didn't hear.

"Then what do you want? Because I know what I want."

She sniffed a bit, looking like she might cry. Mal hadn't known angels could shed tears.

"You're not the first to tell me you love me, you know. But I don't think any other man has said that to me and then stayed the night."

He lifted her chin with his finger.

"Ya thought all I wanted was a tumble? Hell, if all I wanted was the release, I know how to do that m

Comments
Thursday, 16 November 2006 09:42
Lovely, so glad Mal didn't bolt or make an excuse to go when he woke up and realised where he was and it was nice to see that touch of vulnerability from Inara worrying over whether he would leave her like all the rest. Best they get back to their exploring! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 16 November 2006 16:18
This was a beautiful morning-after piece. I love the fact that Mal stayed and that Inara was a bit concerned he wouldn't be there. And I really loved his description of her as an angel, although I don't know about fallen, seems to me Mal puts her on a pretty high pedestal.
Friday, 17 November 2006 00:11
=) Awwww! I liked it. It put a dippy little smile on this shipper's face. It's always a treat when you post, WTG.
Friday, 17 November 2006 02:14
Mal would think of Inara as a "fallen" angel, if only cuz it seems she's slumming by being with Mal rather than some wealthy businessman or noble who could give her anything she could ever want on the property front, TamSibling;)

Still...I am shocked and amazed Mal stayed put...but damn proud! This is the kind of thing I would hope for: the Stand. Mal looks down the barrel of Lady Luck's pistol and prays he wins this round of Russian Roulette, all to get Inara's love. And he hit the jackpot:D

BEB

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