Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

You Gotta Sin to Get Saved

Saturday, November 11, 2006

The first gal to use feminine wiles on Mal. Oh and there is a brief nod to a particular SF author, if anyone catches it. :> (R++)
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Belongs to somebody not me. Blah blah blah, yackety schmackety.
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CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2702    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Mal had spent the last 15 minutes unsuccessfully attempting to deal with the cowlicks in his hair. It was no use - he was just going to have to go to the dance looking something like a hedgehog. He studied himself in the mirror for a moment. He'd finally started to fill out some this summer, no longer looking quite so scrawny. But still with the gorram hair he'd had since the day he came cryin'...

Maybe the girls wouldn't notice? Nah, just his luck. His very first dance without his Ma keepin' an eagle eye on him and the girls would prolly all be giggling at him. Prolly not even get himself a kiss, much less anything else.

Caroline Reynolds' voice called up to him. "Malcolm Reynolds, get yourself down here! Tommy and Joe just got here! Hurry up or you'll be late!"

He made one last attempt on the hair and just gave up. "Coming, Ma!"

Caroline Reynolds surveyed her 15-year-old boy as he appeared in the kitchen. She had to remind herself that 'boy' didn't apply any more. He was almost as tall as his father had been, and looking to be just as handsome. She smiled to herself as she handed each of the boys baskets with baked goods for the potluck.

"No sneakin' the lemon bars a'fore you get there! And be sure to thank Preacher Wilkinson for hosting the dance."

"Yes, ma'am," the boys all chorused. Mal's Ma might have been a tiny woman, but they all knew that she was not to be messed with. The screen door slammed shut behind them.

"Hey, Reynolds, I hear Wilkinson's lettin' lil' Becky come to the dance," Tommy Chen said, as they headed down the road into town.

"Is that so?" Mal was trying to play it cool. He'd had a crush on Becky ever since they were both eight. Course now, parts of her weren't so little any more.

"Wouldn't mind me some time with that lil' Becky," Joe Turner laughed. "I could show her a thing or two her daddy never imagined."

"You wish," Tommy laughed. "I know for truth, Joe Turner, neither you nor Reynolds here have got yer cherries busted yet. We'd best be seein' to that a'fo

Comments
Saturday, 11 November 2006 23:19
Aww...gotta love Mal's mom. Definitely can see where our Captain gets some his better quirks from;)

And I guess Becky Wilkinson had her eye on our favourite rancher's son for a while now...cuz I assume that even a rebellious preacher's daughter is not gonna just choose the first schmuck with lust in his eye for a tumble;D

BEB
Sunday, 12 November 2006 00:02
Yep! That's exactly the way it would have happened. And yeah, I love stories with Mal's mom in them too!
Sunday, 12 November 2006 07:28
Very good story and I love the way you told it. That Becky is a lucky girl! Mal's Ma made me laugh, waiting up for him and fully aware of just what he had done and with who. Can't pull the wool over his mama's eyes. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 12 November 2006 07:32
not 1, but 2 shouts to the Finest House in NYC. Long live the Spider; the Lady and the Mick of Time; and my personal favorite, Ralph von WauWau.
Sunday, 12 November 2006 22:45
Yay! Somebody got the reference!

Thursday, 25 January 2007 12:43
and... I don't know if you intentionally did this (I'd like to THINK you did!!)... Mal's Ma uses a Companion quote about being a man... maybe that's why Mal's been so terse with Inara... because his mama was a Companion, once upon a time...
Or am I stating previously obvious things?
Friday, 23 March 2007 16:10
lol, stating the perfectly obvious is FUN!! =) such a gorram sweet shiney fic this one, very well done!!

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