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The Legacy of Uncle Jack, Chapter 3/11

Monday, November 6, 2006

A pre-series piece about how Wash, who really seems the Upstanding Citizen type to me, fell in with thieves and criminals. The frame story has Mal, Zoe, Wash, Bester, and later Kaylee; the backstory starts out with Wash and and other characters, then works forward in time to met up with the frame story (which is set shortly after Wash and Zoe marry), and includes a fun Jayne cameo. Chapter 3: Frame Story: Wash runs away from the Alliance lawforce. Backstory: Wash runs away from the Alliance military.

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3.

Zoe ran for the bridge, with Mal and the new buyer close on her heels. They pounded onto the bridge together, and Wash asked “Okay, what now?”

“Lose the cops, and you can set me down anywhere,” the buyer suggested.

“Sure, let me just do that,” Wash said calmly. Zoe put a hand on his shoulder. He wouldn’t respond – his mind, his whole body was flying Serenity right now – but he’d know she was there. That was important to him. He’d told her so, in a less fraught moment – that it mattered to him to know she was there, and safe, even if there was nothing she could do.

The comm screen blinked to life, and the cruisers demanded insistently that Serenity put down. Wash silenced the comm and slowed the ship, descending.

“What are you doing?” Mal and the new buyer demanded.

“I’m losing the cops, like you asked,” Wash replied calmly.

He scanned the ground, looking for a likely spot, and finally found one that suited his purpose. The space was just large enough for Serenity to put down in, and Wash settled her squarely in the middle of it. Just in front of the little rocky patch where Wash set them down, the ground dropped steeply away; beyond that, foothills rose up in a rolling succession. All around, the forest cover prevented the cruisers from landing too close. Two of them set down in the nearest available empty spaces, while the third hovered above.

“Looks to me like you’re making us a sitting duck,” Mal said.

“Sit tight,” Wash told him. He grabbed the intercom and said “Best—sorry, Kaylee, I’m going to cut the thrusters but I want you to keep the main drive warm.”

The voice of their new mechanic, only aboard for a month, came quavering back over the intercom. “Okay.”

“I wouldn’t have tried this with Bester,” Wash said. “This new gal’s a lot better.”

People in uniform were disgorging from the two landed police cruisers, and approaching Serenity with drawn weapons. The cruiser

Comments
NINA
Tuesday, 07 November 2006 17:02
Why no one is reviewing this story is beyond me. This is *fabulous.* I love the backstory you gave Wash, and it's very, very believeable. In fact, you took one of the ideas I had rumbling 'round my brain. But I love this piece. Great job!
Thursday, 09 November 2006 00:39
Damn it...me too! You stole a cool plot point I wanted to use for a story I got percolating! Oh well...:(

Still...this is amazing stuff, nauticalgal! Especially with the unexpected plot points of Jack canning Wash cuz of Wash's mom blackmailing Jack and Mr. Washburne actually backing his son's decision to fight for the Browncoats. Cuz those were definitely surprising but plausible ideas:)

Can't wait to see what kind of nutty fei hua you're gonna have Wash get up to when he joins up with the Independents...or tries to. Cuz I really wanna see how you explain his lack of discussion about his serivce in the Independent military during the series...

BEB
Tuesday, 12 June 2007 18:32
Love this story. Still reading...

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