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Voices And Visions - Ch 10/12 - Night Vigils

Tuesday, October 31, 2006

J/R; M/I; S/K; Zoe/Wash memories....One long night everyone makes new discoveries of the heart. - Chapters are linked -

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Rating: PG-13

Pairings: Jayne/River; Mal/Inara; Simon/Kaylee; Zoë/memories of Wash

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Voices And Visions

By

Lattelady6

Ch 10 Night Vigils

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River was dreaming and it was wonderful. Each time a scary monster tried to creep into her thoughts, it was pushed away by the powerful man whose body was half covering hers and in whose mind she’d taken refuge.

“Jayne,” she whispered in her sleep and tried to move closer, but she was already wedged under him as far as she could get.

“Shhh, Babe, sleep, ya gotta rest.” He’d been watching over her for the last hour, keepin’ her warm and close.

A smile crossed his face at the unusual thing he was doin’. It was a first for him, just like all the firsts she’d had that day. He’d never just held a woman as she slept. ‘Course that was ‘cause he hadn’t been with anything but whores since Ellie Hansen the summer he was fourteen. Ellie had been older, and shown him what his body was capable ‘a doing. Those months long ago in her pa’s barn she’d taught him to take his pleasure and be sure a woman got hers too. Just like she’d taught him the following fall, when she ran off and got hitched to Hank Wilson, that sexin’ was just that and nothin’ more. Thanks ta her, he always had his pick ‘a trim. The credits would lure ‘em to his bed the first time, but his skills had given him a well earned reputation that allowed him to be a mite choosy.

This holdin’ thing that he was doing with River was somethin’ he hadn’t been interested in tryin’ with the other women he’d slept with. It wasn’t about sex, if’n it was he’d be able to say he’d felt-up Crazy-girl in the cargo bay and be on his merry, but the words stuck in his throat. This was personal and there was no avoidin’ it like he had in the past, when he’d skedaddle after payin’

Comments
Tuesday, 31 October 2006 04:35
Yeah for progress! Simon's fears about River were so well described as well as Jayne's reaction. And the two of them on the cot was just damn hot.

I also loved Mal's moment with Simon and then Inara. Perfect all the way around!
Tuesday, 31 October 2006 04:53
Wow...Simon being NOT in the Jayne murdering mood when he found his mei-mei and the merc...that must've been harder to swallow than one can imagine. Still, I suspect he can at the very least appreciate what Jayne can do for River, insead of to her. Then again, I'm still waiting for the "break her heart and I'll break your neck" speech, from Simon and Mal both.

Also, the way Simon is looking after Zoe, that unspoken agreemnet between them...it's so very Simon, and so very Zoe.

As for Jayne and River...I know I've said this before, and it truly does apply to all the characters, but this relationship is so realistically done, the way you've humanised Jayne, and had River being so mature yet still somewhat naive', it's...well I couldn't do better myself, and I'm not sure I'd want to.

Flawless.
Tuesday, 31 October 2006 10:59
Really enjoyed this though I was surprised at how well Simon accepted Jayne caring for his sister. I think he's grown and this due in large part I am sure to Simon being with Kaylee. it enables him to see things from a slightly different perspective and the realisation that Jayne wouldn't hurt River but it might be the other way around made me smile. Also loved Mal watching over Inara. Ali D :~)
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Wednesday, 01 November 2006 11:23
This was brillant please continue
Thursday, 02 November 2006 06:53
The way you wrote Wash and Zoe in this chapter had me reaching for the tissues because I couldn't stop the tears. Absolutely beautiful.
Thursday, 02 November 2006 07:28
Oh...I just gotta say this up front, Lattelady6: I only re-read stories I adore and I am completely enraptured by this tale of growth and angst and love and sadness:D

BEB

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