Disclaimer: The ‘verse and everyone in it belongs so Joss
Rating: PG-13 - If anyone things this needs to be rated higher let me know and I'll change it.
Pairings: Jayne/River with a tad of Mal/Inara
Beta: My Magic Beta Lady: Ceslas
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Voices And Visions
By
Lattelady
Ch 9/12 Bridges And Storms
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The cargo bay was quiet despite the tension of getting ready to go out on a job. Jayne was transferring crates from the smuggler’s hold to the mule. As soon as he’d opened the bay doors, he’d lit the stogie that was clamped between his teeth. He was doing heavy work, so his long oilskin drover coat was slung over his weight bench. Every so often he’d stop and stare at the weather. The storm had let up some, but in his opinion, the moon was a shit hole. There were pools the size of small lakes dotting the thick red mud for as far as the eye could see. It looked like it had been raining for months.
Kaylee was under the mule with a wrench giving the machine a last minute check. She knew there was nothing wrong with it, because she’d been over it twenty times in the last week, but she was nervous and trying not to show it. The small task gave her something to occupy her hands. Everything was different and it was giving her a heavy feeling in her chest. She just wanted them to get on their merry. She’d always felt like that when the Captain, Zoë and Jayne would head out on a job ‘a crime, but today it was worse because River was going with them and Wash was gone. She sighed and rubbed her forehead, unknowingly smudging it with grease, when she thought about the man who had been like an older brother to her. All the hundreds of hours they’d spent together worrying, waiting, never sure if the people they loved would be returning in one piece or even returning at all. It made her sick at heart to know he was one who hadn’t return
LOVE IT! I've read this set of stories on FanFiction.net, but I can't get enough of them - post faster!
I am speechless, I am without speech!
*waits for speechlessness to pass*
I told you I wasn't a Rayne fan at all, but this fic is so good, I really like the Rayne parts. And I have to agree with TamSibling, that was a damn hot kiss.
I also loved the little moment between Mal and Inara, with him bugging her because he knows the drop is gonna go bad. It's just so like them.
Wonderful work, keep it up!
I'm not much of a Rayne fan either, but your work has such style and elegance. It works well in this verse.
Love your slow build up to M/I and how he wants her to feel free on Serenity.
Strong on tone and theme!
Jayne realising that he had kissed River on the lips and he *never* kisses them on the lips is the confirmation that he has really fallen in love with her. Your Mal and Inara were spot on, love that pairing so much. I am especially pleased that River's ability to see the trap and where the men were hidden came in time for Mal and the crew to be ready for them and not end up with serious injuries. It is always frustrating when stories show River not able to warn anybody until just after the event. Great story! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Jayne is so sunk! He's made out with River - too damn hot to properly celebrate - and actually restrained himself from wanting to go further...things are about to get a lot hotter and weirder;)
BEB
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