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Vioces And Visions - ch 5/12 - Battles Won Battles Lost

Wednesday, October 25, 2006

In the Black once again after Miranda, changes become more obvious. J/R; M/I; S/K Some wonder when the changes began and where they are leading, others just want to keep their nightmares at bay. - All chapters are linked -

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Rating: PG-13

Pairings: Jayne/River, Mal/Inara, Simon/Kaylee

My Magic Beta Lady: Cesla…many thanks to you. Any errors missed are mine alone.

Trivia question: There is a tiny reference in this chapter to two classic movie/novel characters and to an award winning TV series. Hint: The TV series and the novel/movie aren’t related.

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Voices and Visions

By

Lattelady6

Ch 5/12 Battles Won Battles Lost

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Serenity had been back in the Black for three days. When they’d broken atmo, leaving Persephone behind, the entire crew had taken a collective sigh of relief. The smuggler’s hold was full and locked up tight, so there were credits to be made. A shipment from Badger had arrived; seconds after the last Alliance inspector had cleared the boat for flight.

The ship was five days out of Calderon’s third moon, a dung heap of a world that even Jayne had managed to avoid. They had thieving to do and that was where the credits would change hands. A careful search of the Cortex hadn’t given them any information on the people they were meeting. All in all it looked to be business as usual.

“I’m just sayin’ we need to be a mite cautious, is all.” Mal helped himself to a second portion of whatever the hell fancy named concoction Inara had made for dinner. It was mighty tasty. Though he knew it was mostly protein bit with some kinda sauce and a sprinklin’ of dried vegetables and spices.

“Captain,” River Tam looked up from her place beside Jayne. “I could be of help.”

“You sure can, you’re learnin’ to fly this boat real fine.” He went back to eating, trying to pretend that he didn’t understand what she was really saying or that he hadn’t given it some thought his own self.

“I love flying Serenity, and wouldn’t want to stop doing so, but I have other skills that

Comments
Thursday, 26 October 2006 00:35
Awww ... I feel all warm and fuzzy. I love the fact that River and Inara have formed a bond, but Inara needs to go easy on those ribs or she is never going to heal.

I also love that River is so concerned about Simon and hurting him. She is a good little sister, even though she can occasionally be a brat.
Thursday, 26 October 2006 06:25
...*just a little speechless*

... ... ...

Okay, I can speak now.
Wow, that was amazing 'Lattelady6'. I especially love that Jayne, for all his gruffness, is able to be so sensitive, it's incredibly humanising the way you've portrayed him.
And as 'TamSibling' metioned, the bond River and Inara have formed, that unspoken knowledge they have...there's not much seen of that between them so it's wonderfully refreshing.

I've told you before I'm not really a Rayne shipper, but I'm loving this so much, you might just change my mind. Bravo!
Saturday, 28 October 2006 01:33
I have always thought this chapter to be in keypoint in the whole Rayne development process (though all 12 chapters involve important milestones), especially with Inara discovering that Jayne can take up the mantle of conspirator for River after she's had a nightmare and done a few rounds with the punching bag:D

BEB
Saturday, 28 October 2006 17:55
I love the way you explore the fact that Miranda changed everyone and this gentler side of Jayne is lovely. Ali D :~)
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