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Voices And Visions - ch - 4 Voices Of The Living 4/12

Monday, October 23, 2006

Jayne and River move closer as he comes to terms with her brother

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Voices and Visions

By

Lattelady

Ch - 4 - Voices Of The Living 4/12

It was mid-afternoon. Kaylee and River had gone with Inara to finish the supply run. Mal, as Serenity’s owner, was required to go to the Office of Shipping and Permits at Persephone’s local Alliance Headquarters. It was necessary to have all the repair documents registered before he could make an appointment for a physical inspection of the ship. At the last moment, Zoë had decided it was wise to accompany the Captain. It wasn’t anywhere near Unification Day, but the thought of him surrounded by Purple Bellies, gave her the jitters. One hostile word and they might be caught up in red tape until the end of time.

Jayne was sittin’ on a crate, slouched against the outer hull of the boat, watchin’ the activity in the ship yards. A cool breeze was blowin’ and the sun felt good against his body. It ached a mite from sparring with River Tam the night before. He smiled and took a puff of his cigar followed by a sip of Sake from the bottle in his hand. The girl was a tiny thing, but she could sure toss a man around when she had a mind to. Rememberin’ what had led up to it made him reach for his bottle again and take a bigger drink. He was thinkin’ on Crazy-Girl, and not the way he used ta. It made him a might twitchy tryin’ to figure out what it meant.

The Merc felt a shadow ‘cross his shoulders, but knew who it was by the sound of his footsteps. He didn’t bother to look toward the open cargo bay door, just kept staring straight ahead. “Doc, pull up a crate and sit a spell.” Jayne took another pull on his cigar and blew a smoke ring like the Shepherd had taught him. “I been ‘spectin’ ya.”

“You have?

Comments
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 01:05
You made a lovely job of Jayne here though I just can't see him calling River 'girlie'. As for the comment about Mal breaking Inara's heart, that wound goes both ways. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 03:19
I loved Jayne's conversation with Simon, although it does take a bit of a stretch of the imagination to picture it happening ... but I still loved it. And the idea that they tortured River at the Academy by making her cold and that she wouldn't tell anyone was inspired. I can imagine Jayne wouldn't mind keeping her warm.

And is anyone else glad that Mal overheard River's statement about Inara and breaking her heart? While she did also break his, he's the one who's going to have to make the first move!
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 09:09
Lattelady6, I can't respond to any emails you send unless you do so from another email address. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 26 October 2006 02:27
This only proves the brilliance of this work cuz I was blown away again when reading:D

And while it's a tad bit hard to fathom Simon and Jayne having a heart-to-heart...I think that after what happened at Miranda and because of his time spent with River, Jayne's starting to realize that while Simon's still a long way from being a smooth fit in the kind of social strata Serenity travels in...the kind of tenacity and courage Simon has displayed since they first met has at least earned Simon some ounce of respect from our favourite merc. Besides, like Jayne said, he needed to consult with River's doctor, not her brother.

And I think "Girlie" works well for this stage, Alison. She's basically moved past being mentally unstable and reminding her constantly by Jayne keeping up with his original nickname for River wouldn't help, so "Girlie" is still in line with Jayne's "Big Bad Merc" act, but allows for some leeway for his growing affection for our favourite Polymath of Death;D

BEB

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