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Voices And Visions - ch 3 - Ghosts 3/12

Sunday, October 22, 2006

While working to repair <em>Serenity</em>, River sees something she wishes she hadn't. Jayne helps her sort through her emotions and a friendship begins.

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Rating: PG-13

Pairing: Rayne with a small mention of M/I in this chapter.

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Voices and Visions

By

Lattelady

Ch 3 Ghosts

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“You sure you want to do this tonight, Girlie?” Jayne had doubts as he watched River collect their gear. Her eyes were still red and puffy from cryin’ when she’d talked to Zoë earlier, but she seemed determined as she headed toward the control box to unlock the cargo bay door.

“I am sure,” she nodded. “If there isn’t much damage to the circuit board I can fix it and we can replace it tonight.”

“Hold you’re horses. I never said nothing ‘bout hangin’ ‘round whilst you fiddle with that tiny solderin’ thingy Kaylee gave ya, just so’s I can lower you back down the shaft to replace that gorramn board.” It wasn’t much later than ten o’clock, but everyone else had gone to their bunks and that was what Jayne wanted to do. Couldn’t work all day with a skimpily clad female and not end up with urges that needed tendin’ to.

“It will take eleven hours and thirty-three minutes to completely cycle and heat the water in the holding tanks. If we get this taken care of tonight, it will be the optimal temperature for bathing by morning.”

When he glared at her, she glared back and then stiffened her body until she was imitating him completely. “Weapons, women, food and hot showers, gotta take care of a body’s cravin’s.” With each word her voice lowered until she sounded exactly like the Mercenary. Then she shrugged and dropped back into her own speech pattern and stance. “Where they fall on your list of priorities depends on your mood of the moment.”

“Hey, Crazy-Girl, I thought you wasn’t readin’ our minds no longer,” his voice was slow and deadly with an expression to match. Her words had hit too close to what he’d been thinkin’ on for co

Comments
Sunday, 22 October 2006 20:08
Yay for Jayne having a heart, big mushy one that makes him all sweet on River!

I love how reluctant River is to tell him about her vision. And her reaction to seeing and feeling her brother and Kaylee was just perfect!
Monday, 23 October 2006 09:54
I was ROTFL at the part where River couldn't concentrate or do her work because Simon and Kaylee were doing the deed! Um, on a more serious note she might need to let one of them know to keep their hormones in check when she is either doing delicate work or doing something potentially dangerous as that kind of reaction might end up getting them all killed. And thank you for the wave, you are welcome to the feedback. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 03:47
Oh...this scene is even better the second time around, Lattelady6!

Definitely found the "I saw no whore" moment to be the real tearjerker moment, as she's so wanting to tell Jayne about the vision...but she knows he isn't ready:(

BEB

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