Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

First Encounter

Sunday, October 22, 2006

A stand alone story, set pre-Firefly, that suggests some of the crew may have been in contact longer than we expected.

My first fanfic -so please be gentle! Feedback would be appreciated.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 872    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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As the sun finally set behind the foothills, Major Jacob Fu allowed himself a sigh of relief. The scrub he lay concealed in was the only suitable cover in the area, but had left him dazzled by the low late evening sun. That was what happened when you let a suit in an in a cosy Core world plan a mission, little details might mean little to them, but to Fu it meant the difference between meeting his rendezvous after the mission or meeting his maker. Fu had reached his age and rank by not leaving things to chance – he not so much followed the book as had written it. Throughout the war he had been one of the Alliance’s foremost sharpshooters, not a man who got the headlines, but one who got the job done.

He glanced down at his terminal, it was still passive, the message ‘Awaiting Target Confirmation’ above a schematic of the area. Who they thought could intercept and decrypt an Alliance secure channel on this God forsaken rock Fu didn’t ask, it had taken him months to stop them sending him a signal via a tight beam signal that may have well put an illuminated sign above his position. Times were changing, in the war things were simple: you tracked and killed browncoats, the more stripes the better, how you did it was your problem. Fu had spent weeks behind enemy lines, living off the land, taking his chances. Now he was a relic of the past, an old man who didn’t realise times had changed, too highly decorated to be dismissed, too stubborn to take a job behind a desk or in the academy. He had been an artist, now he was just an over-ranked grunt told who to kill by a man halfway across the system who would never look the target in the eyes.

Fu shook his head in disgust at himself, letting his mind wander like some wet behind the ears rookie. It defeated the purpose of being in position hours early if you dozed off and let someone sneak up on you. He stretched his muscles under the blanket hiding his thermal signature, shaking the tension from his muscles. Fu was lithe rather than muscular, but many a young upstart

Comments
Sunday, 22 October 2006 12:27
That was (aside from a couple of pretty minor grammatical errors) spectacular. I could so very easily see Book in that position, and especially for your first fanfic, that was a great effort.

Kudos Anansi, kudos indeed.
Sunday, 22 October 2006 16:38
wow i can see book in that position, you have to wonder how he knows all he does and why the alliance dont kill him, after he was shot and they patched up his hurt i figured he had some dirt on them.... great job
Sunday, 22 October 2006 22:23
Oh Wow, totally neat! No wonder Book took to the cloth and placed his faith in a higher being. Those at ground levels redefine dubious. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 23 October 2006 00:32
Congrats on posting your first fanfic. I always enjoy stories that explore Book's secrets. The father and son arguing were a nice touch, it made the story seem more real.

Hopefully you enjoyed writing enough to post more.
Monday, 23 October 2006 18:25
This is your first fic, huh? Well hell...we had better see more soon, cuz this tale was just shiny:D

Definitely loved how you ended this, with Fu/Book making an important decision to not kill either McKenzie or Mal.

Though I have to note that Mal was a Sergeant in the Independent Army, not a Captain...or not until at least the end of the war, during Serenity Valley;)

BEB

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