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5 Dances

Saturday, October 21, 2006

River and Jayne dance though life, but given who they are, their steps take many forms...One of the '5 memes' being written about this pair. I've chosen dance.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2070    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: It all belongs to Joss

Rating: R

Pairing: Jayne/River

Notes: This is my attempt at a 5 meme. I jumped in uninvited, but I hope you enjoy. It turned out a bit different than I expected.

Note 2: It’s been a while since I’ve done any serious dancing. I did a lot of research, but if something is incorrect that’s the reason.

5 Dances

By

Lattelady

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1. Salsa:

The first time River Tam danced with Jayne Cobb, they danced the salsa. Their bodies moved vigorously as had been done on Earth-That-Was. But instead of lively Cuban music with elements of jazz, rock and soul, they had only the background chatter of the crew in the galley.

The elements that clearly defined their movements as salsa instead of the similar mambo were the lightening speed at which they danced, and the fact that the accent was on the first beat of each three-beat measure instead of the second.

As dances go, this one was very short and could have easily turned deadly. She had been armed with a knife and he with his strength and temper. No one had seen it coming, not even the participants.

Accented beat one first measure, River stepped forward to facilitate the downward slice of the butcher knife. Jayne pulled back as pain erupted across his chests. The invitation was issued, the dance begun.

Beat two, he gasped in shock and surprise. She stood silently waiting for his next move.

Beat three, Everything stopped for a millionth of a second, as he fought to control the caged animal in him. Brown eyes met blue. She stood frozen, unsure what the next step was.

Accented beat one, second measure, He lost his battle, surged to his feet and backhanding her hard enough to draw blood. She crashed to the deck, her face hidden.

Beat two, River fought to catch her breath. Her eyes glazed. She was confused, lost, and unsure why she’d abandoned her usual solo to enter into a couples d

Comments
Sunday, 22 October 2006 00:24
hey i like that.......i know nothing about dance, but that was still fun all the same
Sunday, 22 October 2006 00:44
That was AWESOME Rayne! Hot and sensual and sexy and just damn cool! Thanks so much for sharing - I loved it!
Sunday, 22 October 2006 04:47
That was....unexpectedly beautiful.
Loved the whole damn thing, and I'll admit that's not usually like me, because I am decidedly NOT a Rayne shipper.

Yay for Lattelady6!!!
Sunday, 22 October 2006 12:39
Agreed - you made Rayne believable and it worked.

Thanks


Vera
Monday, 23 October 2006 05:54
Oh...this just proves you make Rayne an addictive property, Lattelady6! Cuz between this sensual and expressive look at Jayne and River, and the sheer awesomeness of "Voices and Visions"? I can't help want to praise you as someone Joss "needs" on his team when things get started up again:D

BEB

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