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Damsel in Distress - Book 1, Ch 14

Friday, October 20, 2006

B1C14: BDHs recover from their losses, and head for the next job...
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CHAPTER 14

The Infirmary was getting crowded. Zoë reclined on the side bed, her foot propped up. River curled up on the bed and fell asleep next to Zoë. It was an unusually intimate position for the two, but given River’s behavior of late, they were just glad to see her calm. Kaylee lay on the central bed, doped to dull the pain, waiting her turn as Simon tended to Zoë.

“Baby, you okay?” Wash asked, hurrying in and taking Zoë’s hand.

She kissed him as calmly as if the doctor were treating a mosquito bite.

“She’ll be fine,” Simon answered, strapping a brace onto her foot. “The bullet nicked the bone. I’d tell you to stay off of it for a few weeks, but you wouldn’t listen.”

“She needs to stay off of it? I can keep her off of it,” Wash assured quickly, and then turned to Zoë. “Sweetie, you are hereby confined to bed.”

“You can’t order me around,” Zoë challenged, playfully nuzzling Wash. “I outrank you.”

“Rank has nothing to do with it. I have other tactics.”

“Yes, and we don’t need the demonstration here,” Mal said curtly, entering the Infirmary. “Wash, where we headed?”

“Persephone at the moment, Captain. Figured we could use a little re-supply and find work. Were you thinking some place different?”

“I thought we might head for Stolte,” Mal answered. “See if we can make a contact about this Osiris run. If the job is still there, we can make a good bit of money. A trip to Osiris might also give us a chance to unload that Lassater that’s burning a hole in my cargo hold.”

“I’ll send them a wave.” Wash kissed Zoë’s hand before he let go and then headed back to the bridge.

Simon tended to Kaylee’s wounds; he did his best to swallow his anger at her attackers. She was covered with bruises, welts, and lacerations. He had yet to find any broken bones, but as far as Kaylee was concerned everything hurt, so it was difficult to assess the true damage. At the moment, he was checking for breaks along her torso.

“How is she?” Mal asked.

“She’s in a lot of pain,” Simon answered, cautiously. “Some o

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 05:22
Posting 14 chapters in a row is called flooding.

It's rude because it doesn't allow for anyone else's work to be seen on the main page. At the moment this story is the only thing on the front page of the site.

I'm sure you have written a great story but 14 chapters posted back to back is not a good thing.
Friday, 20 October 2006 14:48
Ignore the unkind remark from LucasHarper, I am loving this story and posting the chapters back to back means the full impact of the story can be enjoyed in full. As for it stopping other stories being posted I don't see that at all. You cannot have too many stories about our favourite thing in the 'verse and I love this story to bits! So much kudos and many thanks for a shiny read. I'm assuming if this is Book 1 then you are working on a Book 2. Somehow I don't believe that 'Elle' is dead, I think she is faking another death so she can live again. Nobody gets that good at cunning without a whole lot of practice. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 October 2006 20:07
Yes, don't worry about the large posting...some people haven't learned to navigate web site evidently.

Very well done story. Enjoyed it...
Saturday, 21 October 2006 03:30
My apologies for the large posting, and thanks to those who kindly shared the Blue Sun Room etiquette of not flooding. Next time, I will post in smaller chunks (but I will still have the whole story available in PDF at once, just as this one is).

This is actually Book 1 of 3! Stay tuned!
Sunday, 22 October 2006 21:48
Take Lucas' posting in stride, valeriebean. Some people get grumpy when you act all prolific. Just as ScrewtheAlliance, who's had more than one comment shot at him for posting massive individual chapters. It's all about personal preference. I happen to like being able to read several chapters at once, so the overal flow is much smoother;D

BEB
Tuesday, 24 October 2006 07:37
i love this story!! so glad i stumbled upon it. (and glad it was posted when and the way it was)

you are a great writer - your technical writing skills are superb. the imagery, suspense, action, and dialogue are all wonderful.

did you ever consider astrophysicist/writer as a job title?
Thursday, 02 November 2006 12:26
“Jayne was civil,” Inara was saying. She hesitated at ‘civil’, only meaning it in the loosest sense of the term. “Polite. Helpful. He was a different man—for all of one day.”
“I’m sorry I missed that,”
~ BWAHAHAHA !!!

The bit at the end about the dress and Kaylee coming home was the perfect way to end this book, IMHO.

I agree with all but the first comment about posting several in a row. All it takes is one click to get to the full BlueSunRoom list, and I liked having all of the story at once to read (though I read it way after you posted it). Can't wait for books 2 and 3.

On that note, I will make the offer I alluded to in chat. Cookies for chapters. I will send you homemade cookies if it will inspire you to write faster. This is not a joke. I will actually send some to you. :) Enjoyed this whole first book, and like I said, looking forward to the rest.
WENZ
Tuesday, 27 February 2007 12:33
I really love this story! Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful fics. I can't wait for Book 3!
Thursday, 29 May 2008 02:16
~~~"She was so … protective of him.”

“Like you are of River?”

Simon smiled thoughtfully. “I guess so.”

As Kaylee drifted off to sleep again, Simon added, “Like I am of you.”~~~

That made me come over all squishy. Loved that. Thank you.

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