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Damsel in Distress - Book 1, Ch 12

Friday, October 20, 2006

B1C12: Getting closer to rescuing Damsel #1. Scoping out the rainiest planet ever, when suddenly, by the fog lamps, we see a familiar floral bonnet...
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CHAPTER 12

In the pre-dawn hours, Serenity landed on Three Hills through a torrent of rain. The landing pad filled with exhaust and steam from the engines. As Mal opened the doors, he saw an old friend, Leslie Maxwell, who had founded a college in the town. Maxwell was an average height man who had gained a small gut since Mal had last seen him. His tailored suit glinted in the lights that illuminated the landing pad. Maxwell’s hands were folded, his index fingers steepled and touching his lip. This was an old “all clear” sign the two held, so Mal let his trigger hand relax.

“Max!” Mal called, adopting a jovial air as he stepped off Serenity. “It’s raining here!”

“What do you expect, Mal? It’s the rainy season.” Maxwell’s voice was a deep base.

Mal wore a wide-brimmed hat which only succeeded in keeping the water out of his eyes. His coat weathered the storm faithfully. Maxwell stepped back, making space under the awning for Mal to stand.

“Just been awhile since I been caught in the rain. Any chance of it letting up?” Mal asked.

“Today?” Maxwell chortled. “Let me educate you on how we predict weather during the rainy season. Look over there. Do you see that sky scraper?”

Mal looked, but the rain fell in sheets so thick, he could barely see ten feet in front of him. “No”

“That means it’s raining. If you could see it, that would mean it’s going to rain very, very soon.”

“No kidding,” Mal chuckled. “What do you do with all that water?”

“What any good business man does. Bottle it up and sell it to the tourists. I hear you’ve run into trouble, old friend.”

“Nothin’ serious,” Mal dismissed. “I’m looking for a ship called the Neptune. Have they landed here?”

“Just last night. They’ve stayed locked down pretty tight. Probably waiting for the rain to let up.” Maxwell laughed again. “Your ship looks a little beat.”

“Well it happens when you’re short a mechanic. If you could lend me some of your services, I’d be happy to repay you.”

“Now Mal,” Maxwell chided. “You know I can’t be bothered to wai

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 14:29
Mal in a dress again? Made me laugh out loud and his dialogue at the end with Inara was so natural and Joss-like it did make me smile. Loved Kaylee catching a glimpse of undercover Mal while I was frantically praying that in her excitement she wouldn't give him away. Very sad that Max is dead, at this rate our favourite crew won't have any friends left in the 'verse but them as travel by Firefly. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 22 October 2006 19:59
Oh...Mal in a dress...redux...sweet Jesus that's funny;)

Definitely glad the crew's up for some midnight mischief...just hope things go smoother than they usually do:(

BEB
Sunday, 22 October 2006 20:00
Oh...and I love the Ghost in the Shell reference, valeriebean! Wonder how many readers will catch it?

;)

BEB
Wednesday, 01 November 2006 19:20
The weather prediction during the rainy season is classic!

LO frakkin L @ Mal using the floral bonnet trick again. Great stuff!

Sounds like thrilling heroics are about to ensue. Good. :)

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