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Damsel in Distress - Book 1, Ch 5

Friday, October 20, 2006

After being ravaged by space pirates, the crew of Serenity sets out to take back what’s theirs. However, their pursuit is cut short when they are forced into hiding by a bureaucratic world. Now Mal must rely on a mysterious new passenger as he seeks to rescue his own damsel in distress… Download the complete PDF <a href="http://www.valeriebean.com/writings/fireflyfic/"here</a>... B1C5: Pile on the complications... Who is this stranger and gorramit Wash, where are you taking us?

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CHAPTER 5

Wash waved port control on Newhall yet again, no longer expecting an answer. For a world with such strict policies and demands for having papers and ground clearance, it surprised him that no one had noticed them land. They were probably rejoicing over the food delivery. He wondered if anyone at Newhall would notice them take off. He’d seen the anti-aircraft satellites coming in, but they seemed unconcerned with his landing. He sent the wave again and reclined in his chair. His dinosaurs had been stolen and all that remained on the console was one forlorn looking palm tree. Finally, the comm crackled in response.

“Firefly vessel, what is your purpose?” a woman with a thick Chinese accent cackled. Wash briefly wondered if the comm had been damaged and made a note to tell Kaylee.

“We’re seeking clearance for takeoff,” Wash answered.

“You are not cleared for landing.”

Could they not understand him? Was the transmitter failing as well?

“I’ve already landed; I’m looking to take off.” He spoke slowly and clearly. When there was no response, he tried again in Chinese.

“What is your business here?” the comm crackled.

“We’re looking for food.” It sounded more like a question when he said it, but seeing as they had decided against the charity handout and opted for thievery, he wasn’t sure how to respond.

“You are not permitted to land.”

Wash picked up the palm tree and threw it at the com. “I just want to take off!” he yelled. This was hopeless. He clicked on the sensors and began low-level scans for anti-aircraft, now assured that take-off would not be as smooth as landing.

At that moment, Zoë came bounding onto the bridge. “Problem, baby?”

Wash sighed loudly. “Of course not. Just trying to get a beat on the anti-aircraft so we can make a smooth getaway.”

“I thought we were gonna make a smooth getaway by getting clearance.”

“Should be easy right?” Wash answered, annoyance lacing his voice. Zoë put a hand on his shoulder, a move that always made the world’s problems fade. With a singl

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 12:43
I meant to comment on a thought Jayne had in an earlier chapter about why Mal kept Simon and River on board when he hated Simon - I really disagree with that assessment. I don't think the Captain hates Simon just what he once stood for with his rich Core-bred life in the lap of the Alliance while all the little folk were being crushed by Alliance taxes and the boot of their heels. I think he respects the doctor mightily, mostly for his devotion to getting his sister out of Alliance hands and for his skill as a doctor. This chapter certainly ups the ante as they say and is making my heart pound fit to bust like poor Serenity's straining engine. I can only think that Craddock had Kaylee siezed because the Neptune has lost its' mechanic or to make it hard for Serenity to continue to fly. I am hoping his death will be a painful and messy one. Preferrably at the hands of Vera. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 21 October 2006 05:14
Oh...Jayne's got his cousin back? Shiny;)

And I damn well hope the crew can get their bearings back and make chase after Craddock and the Nepture ASAP:(

BEB
Wednesday, 01 November 2006 13:07
Much as he wanted to kill Jayne most days, he didn’t want someone else killing him.
~ BWAHAHAHAHA !!!!

Just being picky, but I think it is WhiteFall, not Hall, unless you are not talking about the moon from the pilot episode.

Wash is such a damn good pilot, it's good that he is on top of his game with Serenity not doing so well and missing her mechanic.

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