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Damsel in Distress - Book 1, Ch 4

Friday, October 20, 2006

After being ravaged by space pirates, the crew of Serenity sets out to take back what’s theirs. However, their pursuit is cut short when they are forced into hiding by a bureaucratic world. Now Mal must rely on a mysterious new passenger as he seeks to rescue his own damsel in distress… Download the complete PDF <a href="http://www.valeriebean.com/writings/fireflyfic/"here</a>... B1C4: Just when you've saved one damsel, here come two more that need rescuing.

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CHAPTER 4

Kaylee sulked back to Serenity, her illusions of a relaxing walk about town quashed. A hundred feet from men handing out food and she was being asked to walk the other way. Captain going about thieving meant a fast departure, which meant Serenity needed some tuning up. But since the pirates had taken any tool in plain sight, there were a few things that just couldn’t be fixed properly. In the two days since they had been robbed, her poor Serenity had Frankensteined itself. The stove in the kitchen was down to one burner; the electrical components of the rest having been sent to other tasks. The oven was completely dismantled, but should anyone need heat, they could just go to the engine room because the cooling system was almost entirely dysfunctional. She’d managed to construct a make-shift radiator by dismantling one of the toilets and running a pipe outside the ship to cool water before running it past the engine. At one point, the water pump had broken and Jayne had pumped it manually for nearly an hour while she tried to fix it with a twelve inch screwdriver and no wrench. It only helped so much. Water was a terrible coolant for such extreme hot and cold temperatures and the anti-freeze was spread thin. That would be their biggest problem. Being in atmo, they had no way to cool the water and thus the engine would run hot.

Back at Serenity, Kaylee grabbed her last remaining screwdriver, a 12 inch manual slot. She’d been using it as hammer, a wedge, a skewer, and every now and then as a screwdriver. Scanning the dining hall, she looked at the last working burner. If they had food tonight, they’d need it. Besides, there wasn’t much she could think of that hadn’t already been done.

“Is there anything I can do to help?” Book asked, startling her.

She tapped the screwdriver on her hand, trying to look contemplative instead of clueless. “Not unless you can fix the compressor.”

“I’m afraid I don’t know how those work.”

“Then I guess the best we can hope for is that we don’t burn up on our way

Comments
Friday, 20 October 2006 12:32
Oh good gorram you do like to pile bad luck on top of calamity don't you? But you do it so well. I am concerned as to not only how and why Serenity got attacked/boarded yet again (doesn't anyone keep an eye out for unfriendlies?) and why they want Kaylee alive. And what keeps niggling is how come there was no one keeping watch on the Neptune? Pirate ship and all they are hardly likely to trust no one will try to get on to their ship of stolen goods. Can't wait to see what happens next and sure hope Jayne and Kaylee are okay. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 21 October 2006 04:42
Oh this is wonderful...Jayne and Kaylee are MIA, presumably with the pirates, the crew has only gotten back some of their missing gear and Serenity could go BOOM! when taking off without Kaylee around to supervise. You definitely like to water and feed the Tree of Angst, don't ya?

;)

BEB
Wednesday, 01 November 2006 11:29
Lots of goodness in this chapter doll.

Just when it seems that things can't go any more wrong for the BDHs, you throw even more go-se on their heads. I can't wait to read more and see how it all turns out.

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