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Voices And Visions ch 2/12 - Tentative Beginnings

Thursday, October 19, 2006

New relationships form and others change, while repairing <em>Serenity</em>, after their battle with the Reavers. Post BDM

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Voices and Visions

by

Lattelady

Ch 2. Tentative Beginnings

Captain Malcolm Reynolds sighed as he headed toward the cargo bay. There wasn’t a muscle in his body that didn’t hurt. It was a toss-up weather he or Serenity had been damaged worse in the battle on Mr. Universe’s Moon, but like his boat he was on the mend.

Times like this, he was tempted to thank a God, he no longer believed in, that Jayne Cobb always ran true to form. When they’d high-tailed it out of the Maidenhead six weeks earlier, the big man had been bloodied, bruised and furious from takin a beatin from a wisp of a girl, but he’d remembered to grab the stolen money from the heist on Lilac.

Fanty and Mingo had been among the injured when River Tam’s tendency toward brain hick-ups had exploded into a supernova. He’d learned later that the Operative had finished off the job the girl had started. No one who had glimpsed her abilities, that day, had been allowed to live, except for those on his boat. There wasn’t a need to go back and give the twins their twenty-five percent cut. Even with all that cash, and the crew doin’ most of the work, it was gonna be touch and go getting Serenity in shape to pass an inspection that’d allow her to take to the Black, anytime soon.

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Once most of the damage was cleared away, and there wasn’t much muscle work to be done, Jayne found himself paired-up with River in work details. He coulda made a fuss and fought with Zoë to do at least some of the weldin’, but it didn’t take no genius to see that the woman needed hard physical labor to keep her busy durin’ the day and allow her to sleep at night.

There was a lot of rewiring necessary and Crazy-Girl was the only one small enough to

Comments
Thursday, 19 October 2006 22:19
Love it! I love the way you're exploring Mal's tortured soul in light of the tragedy and I think Zoe and River crying together would be just the kind of catharthis they would both need.

And I really love the way Jayne is warming up to River - and the way he's teasing with her. Reminding her to still be a girl ... now, where is the Silee goodness? There's going to be some, right? :o)
Friday, 20 October 2006 00:58
This is very shiny - I loved it! You have a really good pace for the aftermath and crew's recovery from Miranda. Everyone is hurting one way or another and what they have been through has changed them but also made them stronger and more tightly bound. Very good crew interactions too! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 October 2006 06:01
Oh...it's even better the second time around, Lattelady6!

;D

BEB
Monday, 23 October 2006 01:28
Loved it! You were right on point, and it filled lots of gaps. Looking forward to more of your writing.
Thursday, 17 May 2007 19:56
Loved this series! I hope you continue to write because you are really talented :)

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