Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Treasure, Chapter 1

Thursday, October 19, 2006

The crew finds itself struggling to survive when the 'verse experiences an economic collapse. Fic features all of the crew, with Simon/Kaylee and Wash/Zoe ships.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1412    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author’s Notes

This fic takes place after the last episode of the show. Movie will not be happening. The story will contain five chapters and end at about 21,000 words.

The characters don’t belong to me; Joss is boss.

A huge thank you to my beta-testers: Ann, Rivendellrose, Warrior Zoe, and Noandwhere.

Chapter One

Kaylee followed Inara from the engine room to the companion’s shuttle, wondering why Inara wished to speak with her in private and what could account for the look on her friend’s face. Granted, Inara had never been sunshine and sparkles – that was Kaylee’s territory – but lately the companion had seemed sullen, and today even more so. As she walked, Kaylee wiped her hands on the outer thigh area of her jumpsuit. Inara’s shuttle was full of such rich beauty, gorgeousness that made one’s eyes hurt just trying to absorb it, that the mechanic wanted to ensure no engine grease sullied it.

“I think Simon’s startin’ to really notice me,” Kaylee whispered excitedly as they neared the shuttle. Her voice was low enough that she didn’t think anyone would overhear. Jayne and Book were lifting weights together but they were far enough away that Kaylee didn’t think she’d have to risk one of Jayne’s derisive remarks about Simon.

“He’s been so much sweeter lately,” Kaylee continued. “Didja see how happy he looked at the card game after lunch? He’s way more relaxed. And River too,” Kaylee added, as they entered the shuttle, an elegantly draped piece of fabric brushing against her side. Inara began to pour tea. “She looks better than ever.”

Inara listened to Kaylee’s joy and was miserable at the thought that she would not be around to see the romance blossom as it inevitably would. She would miss it, as she would miss whatever wonders, sorrows, and strange events happened to Kaylee in the weeks, months, and years to follow. Whatever happiness, disappointments, and fears Kaylee would experience, the two women would have to discuss only via a wave. Inara would be deprived of feeling Kaylee’s warm

Comments
Thursday, 19 October 2006 05:04
Great beginning, it's nice to see River understood by someone, however briefly. Girl deserves some happiness. Look forward to reading more.
Thursday, 19 October 2006 06:39
Oh...the joy before the storm I know is coming. Not because I am psychic...but because cross-posting has some odd effects on how a story is perceived;)

Still...this is a great opening chapter, Stormkpr! Though I must admit I was rather surprised by Inara's honesty. Good surprised...but surprised none the less;D

BEB
Thursday, 19 October 2006 10:33
Uh oh, something really bad must be on the horizon for our valiant but hard pressed crew. Kind of upset at Inara once again leaving, I can't help thinking that with all her training she would be the most able to handle her emotions. Worried also where and how the crew are going to find or earn coin so they can buy food to eat and fuel to keep flying. Things are beginning to look pretty grim, hope you have a silver lining in that there cloud you've got hanging over them! So happy Simon and Kaylee are together and can't stop smiling at the thought of a pregnant Zoe. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 19 October 2006 17:24
Nice start. I'm looking forward to where you take the story from here.

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