Inara exited her shuttle, locking the door behind her, and looked around.
“Not a bad neighborhood,” she said aloud. “Maybe Mal actually landed us somewhere decent, for a change.”
The neighborhood looked a bit better than just “decent,” she reluctantly conceded to herself as she looked over the area. Large manor houses dotted the valley, with sweeping lawns carefully tended by indentured servants. The mixed scents of southern flowers were unmistakable. The river she had seen before landing could be faintly heard. The only thing that distracted from the antebellum look of the area was the nearly invisible, electronic, PriSecure fence around the properties, ensuring that their owners wouldn’t be robbed, or even disturbed by noise from their neighbors. The name on the gatepost read “Pinion Estate,” proving she was in the correct place. The almost inaudible hum of the fence could barely be heard over the sounds of horses being led up the drive, and the singing and chirping of the birds. The contrast caused her to hesitate before crossing the barrier.
She realized she was hesitating, and shook her head. Mal was clearly becoming a bad influence on her. This was her kind of place; the kind of dwelling she had walked into, and out of, hundreds of times. She was a registered Companion, protected, to a certain extent, by the reputation of the Guild. She was as safe here as anywhere. She shook her head again, squared her shoulders, and walked in the front gate, right past the security scanners.
As she approached the main house, the front door opened. It revealed a gray-haired black man dressed in the classic Earth-That-Was clothing of a butler.
“Greetings on this fine day, Miss Serra,” he said, bowing slightly as he opened the door. “Mr. Pinion is expecting you in the ballroom.”
“Thank you,” said Inara, smiling at the polite traditionalism.
The butler closed the door, and with an “If you will follow me,” led her deeper into the house. Inara openly admired the exquisite decoration that was all around her. It was clearl
Definitely curious if Inara's now joined the ranks of the Immortals...you leave her status during the fight between Amanada and Atherton quite vague...quite flexible if Inara's suddenly (but unknowingly) become a new player in the Game;)
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Vera
I had not planned on Inara becoming Immortal (sorry if that spoils anything). Like I said above, I wanted this to be very much like a Highlander episode, where mortal(s) would be involved, but not know the true status of the immortal(s). So, just to be clear, Inara was just in the wrong place at the wrong time, she's not a pre-immie.
Atherton was an obvious choice for an immortal, for the same reason Mal isn't -- skill with a sword. :-)
The exception to all of this, of course, is River; I decided she's good at keeping things to herself, and making immortals immune to telepathy seemed to "out there."
I approve of your decision to leave everyone out of the loop on the immortals, even if you had to hide River to do it. I could actually see Zoe figuring it out first if anyone does, esp. with the resident readers Inara (drugged) and River (silent) out of the running.Post Your Comments
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