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Somethings Gotta Give: Part -8- Walking With The Dead

Sunday, October 8, 2006

Last section of the series - After the battle on Mr. Universe's moon, River helps Mal and Inara find their way.

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Rating: PG

Pairing: Mal/ Inara

Spoilers: The movie Serenity

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=13387>Part 7 - Enemy At The Gate

Somethings Gotta Give: Part -8- Walking With The Dead

Lattelady

Inara knelt beside the med-cot where Mal was muttering in his sleep. His wounds had been treated and the Alliance medic had given him a strong smoother to ease his pain, but it would be weeks before he recovered completely from his fight with the Operative.

“Shhhh, you’re going to be all right,” the dark-haired Companion whispered as she gently stroked his cheek.

“He is walking with the dead, and now there are three new bodies added to those he has already lost.” River Tam spoke quietly from her hiding place in the shadows. Inara hadn’t seen the young girl in the darkened corner watching over the wounded crew of Serenit. “The Captain is cold, and so are you. Share your body heat to make his journey more bearable and ease your pain as well.”

“River…” Inara shook her head trying to deny the gush of feelings that had been threatening to erupt from the moment the Operative had shown up at the Training House demanding her help contacting Malcolm Reynolds.

“It’s what you both want and need.” The girl backed away sliding gracefully though a hidden slit in the tent.

The ghostly words, which River left behind, washed away the last of Inara’s control and sent tears coursing down her face. With hands that shook she pulled aside Mal’s blanket and lay down beside him, careful not to jar any of his wounds.

The Tam girl had been right, Inara was cold. Her skimpy pants and revealing top were perfect for marksmanship contests on the Core Worlds, but did nothing to protect her in a real battle on an almost dead moon. She’d only chosen the outfit because it allowed her to move freely and quickly while shooting her powerful bow. She’d never believed any of them would survive the Reaver’s attack, and she

Comments
Sunday, 08 October 2006 03:57
Nice ending, but can't you write more? Please ... I can beg, although it is not becoming!

I really like the way you've captured Mal and Inara, their ego, their pride, their pain, their need, their longing, it's all beautifully written and short (brevity is not my strong suit, so I admire it greatly in others, especially when executed so successfully!)

I look forward to more posts from you!
Sunday, 08 October 2006 04:37
Beautiful ending. Very near perfect. That's all I have to say.


"Hey, hey, hey! Them ain't kosherized rules!"

Rob O.
Sunday, 08 October 2006 06:03
Wow. Just wow.

This little series of ficlets has left me speechless. I am without speech!

It's beautiful.

And I can't wait for 'Becoming 'Nara'.
Sunday, 08 October 2006 11:10
Absolutely brilliant! Breath taking and stunning with a wonderful piece at the end with River giving both her friends the peace and comfort they have been denying themselves in each other. And poor Zoe, I could so see her being tied to memories of her loss, her grief over losing Wash making it hard to move on. Wow, this was a great series. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 08 October 2006 18:37
Wow! Beautifully written in the Romantic Tradition.. and flowing nicely with canon.

I especially liked the Operative/Inara filler segment. She seemed terrified by the time Mal arrived.

Thanks again Lattelady for posting.
Wednesday, 11 October 2006 00:50
Oh wow...this was a beautiful ending, Lattelady! Especially the end of the dream sequence where Inara helps Mal let go some of the pain he's been carrying around inside of himself:D

BEB

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