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Something’s Gotta Give: Part - 2 - Nothin ’ Left To Lose

Sunday, October 8, 2006

M/I romance takes place between Objects In Space. The night before Inara leaves Serenity she decides she may be making a mistake, so she leaves something behind.

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Pairing: M/I

Spoiler: Minor ones for Objects In Space and Serenity the Movie

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=13380>Part 1 - Shattered

Something’s Gotta Give: Part 2 - Nothin ’ Left To Lose

By

Lattelady

Captain Malcolm Reynolds’s footsteps echoed through his quiet ship. The usually empty cargo bay had a pile of crated furniture and a number of large trunks tucked into one corner. It was late and the rest of the crew was asleep, even Wash had closed down the helm for the night, but no matter how tired Mal’s body was, nervous energy kept him from sittin’ in one spot long enough to close his eyes.

‘He’…no he corrected in his head…‘they was headed for a life changin’ event early the next mornin when Serenity made a quick stop on a mountainous moon so’s one of the crew could leave, never to return.’

“Damn,” he muttered under his breath and climbed the stairs to the catwalk. “T’was ‘Nara’s decision, can’t conjure why I feel so gorramn guilty ‘bout it.” But he did, and Kaylee wasn’t helpin matters none with her dirty looks and cryin’. The girl had taken it into her head that he was somehow responsible for the Companion’s sudden need to move on to greener pastures.

“Mal,” Inara stood facing him at the other end of the walk. “I…ah…wanted to…ah…”

“Evenin’ ’Nara,” he tried to sound casual-like, but it was hard when he knew it was her last night on his boat. It was a good thing he hadn’t let him own self warm to her any, t’otherwise tomorrow would be a right painful day.

“I wanted to thank you for this detour. I realize Sheydra’s Training House isn’t exactly on the way to New Melbourne where you’d been headed.” The wave had come two days earlier, with an offer of employment and it was exactly what Inara needed. She knew her days as an active Companion were over. This way she could continue in the Guild, but as a teacher. Mal wouldn’t know the changes he’d wrought in her life. It was a small th

Comments
Sunday, 08 October 2006 02:52
Very impressive. You handle the interior dialogue nicely. Since there were only two, possibly three moments during the series where we truly witness Inara's feelings regarding Mal, some insight from your perspective is welcome.

Keep up the good writing. Nice grammar as well.


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Rob O.
Sunday, 08 October 2006 03:01
I like this internal moment as well, trying to examine exactly what made Inara leave that trunk - I love the notion that she left it on purpose, just to taunt him ... atta girl!

I love these, more please!
Sunday, 08 October 2006 10:07
Like TamSibling I think Inara left the trunk on purpose, a subconscious wish to have an excuse to return at some future date, when both her heart and her pride are able to weather facing up to what she is leaving behind. The tangle that is Inara and Mal can only be unravelled if both are completely honest with the other yet they are volatile fragile creatures. Each being the spark to the other's flame. This was another masterful job. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 04:27
Definitely loved how you had Mal take that one last shot at Inara before her departure...and the accompanying regret. I think we would want to see the private goodbye a lot more smooth and fuzzy...but I doubt it would have happened that way;)

Still...awed and impressed with what you got here, Lattelady:D

BEB

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