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devil's advocate

Sunday, October 8, 2006

So many Silee fanfics with pregnancy that I thought to play devil's advocate and write this real quick. Not exactly how I would like to see things go but, you know...devil's advocate and all.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2509    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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"So we'll head to Persephone and see what we can't unload there but, in the

mean time we just need to hold tight before..." Mal was interrupted by a coughing

Kaylee. She had been looking a bit green during supper.

"Li'l Kaylee are you feeling a'right?"

"Shiny Captain. Just a little bit of a cranky stomach. Nothin' worryin' about."

"Maybe, Simon you could give a once over to Kaylee makes sure she ain't

bad off in anyway."

"That's fine captain. If you want Kaylee we can go straight after dinner."

"No! I mean...er....it's really all just shiny. Nothin' wrong here."

"Well, that may be but, you still need to be visitin' the doc." Inara caught the

worry mixed in with Mal's casual demeanor. It had been about a week now that

Kaylee hadn't been herself. In fact, it was only a few days ago that Inara herself had

caught Kaylee asleep in a chair midday.

"Perhaps Mal's right in this mei mei. We'd never want anything to happen to

you," Kaylee stared down at her plate; pushing the protein substance about. She

never was very good at lyin' especially not to her Cap'n' or 'Nara.

"I'm really a'right. Thanks you for beins so sweets." Simon who had stayed

out of things until now decided to pipe in. He could never let one of the crew fall ill

under his watch.

"Kaylee, it will be no problem and it won't take very long for me to make

sure that everything is okay...."

"It's not that! I'm really not gorram sicks!," Kaylee couldn't take it anymore.

The lies and secrets were just too much for her to handle any longer. It just wasn't in

her.

A perplexed Mal stared at his mechanic. This wasn't like her. "What is it

li'l one? What's goin' on?"

The words bubbled up from Kayle

Comments
Sunday, 08 October 2006 09:54
Way to put the cat among the pigeons but what happened with Kaylee being all moon-eyed over Simon? Also, need to tidy up with the spelling and such. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 10 October 2006 03:39
Oh...I smell an angst-filled sequel where Kaylee's still wanting Simon but carrying Jayne's baby due to a drunken mistake or some other oneshot incident;)

Really fascinated by what you got here, Milia! Definitely wouldn't mind seeing more:D

BEB
Sunday, 15 October 2006 05:26
Little rough in terms of the writing but I like the idea you had behind it. Simon and Kaylee always do seem to have gaggle of kids in every story and while I generally enjoy the Silee it's nice to have a change every once in a while.

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