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Firefly: A New Beginning (Updated and resposted)

Friday, October 6, 2006

When Mal accepts a passenger aboard Serenity , it changes their lives forever.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1212    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“I understand you take passengers on your Firefly Captain Reynolds?” The man enquired.

Mal looked him up and down, he was tall, well dressed and had a look about him that reminded Mal of an alliance general, but still beggars couldn’t be choosers and now Serenity was in the air again they had to find work.

“I do sir”. Malcolm responded.

“Do you have a ships medic?” The man questioned him.

This question made Mal suspicious, Mal had thought that the Alliance had given up looking for River and Simon but maybe this man was a spy, or bounty hunter and Mal wasn’t prepared to put his crew in danger, he wasn’t prepared to risk loosing anyone else.

“Why do you ask?” Mal responded warily.

“I ask because the passenger I wish you to transport needs medical care”. The man responded, without waiting for Malcolm to reply he carried on. “My daughter was badly injured a couple of months back, this town is too volatile for someone like her, my brother and his wife have agreed to take her in”.

“Your daughter, what does she want?” Mal asked, the only type of passenger Mal was going to agree to was the willing kind, the not so willing kind tended to be a whole load of trouble.

“She will not cause you any trouble if that is what you are suggesting Captain Reynolds, she is far from dangerous, she has no memory of anything before the accident, of this planet, her home, of me. She has no ties here; this is her chance to build a new life, far away from here”. The man replied sadly.

“I am prepared to offer you four times the going rate if you agree to transport my daughter safely to Olaris, providing she gets the medical care she requires”.

The money was too good to refuse, the ship needed repairs and fuel, the crew needed food and work, something to take their minds off of all that had happened over the past couple of months.

“Our medic is highly qualified and very dedicated, sir”. Malcolm replied.

“Then I’m sure my daughters needs will not present a problem”. The man commented. “When will you be ready to leave?” He asked

Comments
Friday, 06 October 2006 18:35
A little punctuation at the end would be good. The only bit that freaked me out a bit was Jayne touching Mist like that, it just felt all manner of wrong like he was taking advantage or her only I don't think he was intending it that way. I am troubled a little by the way in which both Jayne and Mal are fixating on the girl which may spell trouble ahead. Hope I'm wrong. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 07 October 2006 05:58
Wow...this was certainly a mighty interesting tale, Loco. Not sure what to make of it though...

The character portrayals were generally good, except for a few minor spots. Though like Alison, I have issues with Mal and Jayne getting all...infatuated with Mist. And's Jayne's moment of comfort with Mist is meant to be something important...but it just seems rather perverted. I guess it's because Mist isn't quite shaped enough in regards to Jayne that we could take him being intimate with her without some serious explanation of how he got to that emotional stage.

There's something great here...I can feel it. Just not quite sure how it can be bumped up a notch. You got talent...it's just the material:S

BEB

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