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Becoming 'Nara

Tuesday, October 3, 2006

Mal/Inara - Finding the hidden woman buried beneath years of Companion training.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3280    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Do I look like my name is Joss?

Rating: R

Pairing: Mal/Inara

Timeline: At the end of BDM and after, no spoilers though.

Magic Beta Lady: IWencheslas

Becoming ‘Nara

By

Lattelady6

The Companion archives carefully tracked all of the Guild’s members. On the almost unheard of occasion that one of them strayed, there was always an inquiry. That was the case with Miss Inara Serra. Though the archivist only posted a short note, the young ladies who’d had the pleasure of being her students for one summer at the only Training House on the Rim knew there was much more to it, than the Guild would ever admit.

They had all heard the delicious rumors of Miss Inara and her year spent on the ship owned by a pirate Captain. They’d been present the day he’d slipped into the House, fought a representative of Parliament, and carried her off, never to be seen again in polite society.

Over time the stories grew to legend proportion. No one ever spoke of the driving force behind Inara’s choice to follow a man, like Malcolm Reynolds into a battle she was unlikely to survive. Nor did they mention the strength of will it took for them to bury their dead and rebuild their lives, out of the ashes of that battle. Not even in the highest circles of the Guild was it whispered that a love existed strong enough to dissolve the tight control of a Companion and resurrect the lost soul of an ex-soldier.

Only two people in the ‘verse knew the real story and even they weren’t sure how it had all began, but the turning points were burned into their memories forever.

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1. First Cut Is The Hardest

The first time they made love it was more like fighting. Inara had only herself to blame. She’d returned to Serenity less than forty minutes earlier. Mal was bitter and angry, already resenting that he’d brought her back. She should have been smart and not continued their argument from the lounge, by following him into the cargo bay, but she was worried

Comments
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 01:33
The first time they made love it was more like fighting.- Yup, that is about as accurate a comment about Mal and Inara as one could make.

Nicely done!
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 03:33
I really liked this. I think it makes perfect sense that Inara would feel completely lost once she gives into her feelings for Mal. She is a woman who is so used to control, to lose it so completely would be devastating!

Write more M/I, please!
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 04:20
I really love this fic and completely agree with TamSibling.
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 04:49
Count me in with the "more, damnit!" camp, lattelday6! Cuz the work you've been doing with River and Jayne via your "Voices and Visions" series (I really hope you're the same one I have been praising up and down over at Fanficiton.net...or I will be a tad embarrassed;D) proves you have the skill to take the BDHs and really put them through the Whedon Emotional Ringer(TM).

Can't wait to see what else you come up with:D

BEB
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 09:09
This was utterly brilliant and you have Inara and Mal so true that is the most wonderfully poignant confection! Love it to bits. It does make sure perfect sense of the mix of emotions that have been making the pair of them strike out at each other with the verbal sparring and so on. It could only hide two passionate hearts yearning to be one. Bravo! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 October 2006 20:57
I read this over at LJ a few days ago and was glad to see it here.

You have a great writing style!

I'm not a big Rayne shipper, but I have enjoyed your "Voices and Visions" series, also. (I hope that's you!)
The scene where Mal follows Inara into the galley pantry is one of my favorite
M/I moments. Inara's misunderstanding, Mal's frustration, and Kaylee's encouragement and advice are perfection.

Thanks! and I hope you keep writing. Even if you have to give the little things like work, school or family.


Friday, 23 March 2007 06:04
sweet... 'Nara's tale did get a bit third-person poetic at times, but i read every word just the same.

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