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THE PURSUIT SERIES: 6. "A Devil Less Benign"

Friday, September 8, 2006

"Shepherd Book's explanation leave the others feeling more tense not less. Meanwhile things begin to unfold that none of them could have predicted.

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TITLE: "A DEVIL LESS BENIGN"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: No specific pairing.

RATING: G.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "INSTINCT"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://unilelu.net/Alison/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Shepherd Book's explanation leaves the others

feeling more tense not less. Meanwhile things begin to unfold

that none of them could have predicted."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"A DEVIL LESS BENIGN"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

Jayne thought he was dead, should have been dead, only he didn't imagine it would hurt this much. No. Pain of this magnitude was surely reserved only for the living. That being the case... Carefully and with great effort the mercenary managed to partly open his eyes. It was just a slit but enough to blow his former thoughts into itty bitty fragments. What the good gorram was this? Everything was white. Not just - white - but dazzlingly, unrelieved, wall to wall, ceiling to floor WHITE. Even that slight movement drained him, his eyelids sliding closed again like metal shutters. Almost he imagined them locking in place. Inwardly stunned he lay on the verge of consciousness, memory betraying every feeling and sensation from that last battle. Battle? Was that what it was? The effort to remember tipped the scales and the unremitting white faded to black, his body shutting down along with his mind. All Jayne Cobb felt was an incredible sense of relief then even that vanished.

* * * * *

Everyone was staring at the object in Shepherd Book's palm. The Captain now on his feet but not looking particularly steady, the panther anxious and sticking close to his side. Simon stared at the scorpion then looked at Kaylee. "Do y

Comments
Saturday, 09 September 2006 01:28
Ohh, mysterious Book. I like this take on his character and that he seems to know what's going on on this moon.

Excellent story and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Tuesday, 12 September 2006 05:50
Oh....things are getting really freaking wacky right now. Especially Jayne getting all patched up by Replicator wannabes:(

BEB
Friday, 22 September 2006 03:08
Its taken me a while to get back to this Amdobell, and as before I am loving how you are weaving this story together. Particularly my man Book. I really like it when people delve into his past and create a backstory for him, filling in the gaps. Good job here.

The ghost of a smile almost settled on Book's lips. He always enjoyed verbally sparring with Serenity's Captain. *Great call here, and tying it back to...um....Our Mrs. Reynolds maybe..Book does spar with Mal quite a bit in the series.

"I wasn't ordained." Book corrected. "I had always had a leaning towards faith. It is not who you follow but what you believe that matters." *Good character build here, I like that you added that he'd always leaned towards faith.

"Religion is not faith, Captain. Religion is for those who need an organised system of belief. Call it the politics of faith if you will." *If you only knew....you've made a true statement here, not just for Book, but one I happen to sorta hold my own self.

Again, you've added a little more mystery to this adventure and I like it. The Jayne sequences are very good, and the "cleaning up" of the battle field was a wonderful picutre.

I'm on to the next chapter.

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