Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Healing - Part III

Tuesday, September 5, 2006

A potentially dangerous situation quickly becomes more dangerous after it is initally diffused. Gabriel and Zoe are at odds in a life-threatening manner, and Mal is in poor condition to intervene. Roller-coaster mood in this one, folks...

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There had been long moments of ponderous silence in the common area. “I’d have to say, hands down, from 1972 to 1983,” Gabriel muttered under his breath. “Look at the standing records.”

Across the foot table from him in the lounging area, Inara and Kaylee turned to stare at the young man in questioning shock.

“Pay no attention,” Gabriel directed offhandedly. “Just talkin’ to myself.”

“Talk to me, instead,” River interjected from her seat nearby. “I’m cuter.”

“I’ll attest to that,” Jayne called from beyond, in the kitchen area where he was foraging for nourishment.

Inara leaned forward, propping her elbows on her knees. “Gabriel… How are you feeling?”

Gabriel arched an eyebrow. “Been better; been worse; need a haircut,” he replied. “Why would you ask such a thing?”

“Um,” Inara started, flustered. “Well, I mean, after what happened yesterday…”

“Well, you see,” Gabriel explained, “the thing is this. Somethin’ like that happens, it’s kinda embarrassin’ for me, so I just tend to pretend like it never happened. Seems easiest on me.”

“Simon’s working on it,” River explained, despite anything that Gabriel had just said.

As Simon and Zoe entered the common area, Inara and Kaylee came to their feet. “How is he?” Inara inquired, referring to Mal.

“Resting comfortably,” Simon informed. “I gave him a sedative.”

“Stubborn bastard kept tryin’ to sit up,” Zoe expanded.

“So bein’ the good doctor that you are,” Gabriel ventured, “you pumped him full of drugs.” River smacked him on the chest, and Gabriel insisted, “I was just jokin’!”

“Future plans?” Kaylee inquired of her captain.

Zoe shrugged. “We got plenty of gas, an’ no definite destination. The list of off-limits planets right now are a damn tad longer than our list of friendly planets.”

“Well, we can’t float ‘till we rot,” Jayne butted in. “Then again, hidin’ on Hera wasn’t too fun, neither.” He paused. “Forget me. I’m jus’ naggin’ cuz I ain’t gettin’ paid, is all.”

“We still got plenty of money stashed onboard from the gun sale,” Kaylee re

Comments
Tuesday, 05 September 2006 18:40
Here I am thinking to myself, "this is really profound". Zoe and Gabriel both make such good arguments I'm not sure whose side to take. Then Mal comes out and makes everything good again. I'm feeling all warm and safe when you drop another bombshell from nowhere! How do you think up this stuff? It's fantastic! I hope the next chapter is ready to post. I can't wait!
Wednesday, 06 September 2006 00:10
Wow, good myth! Glad the Reavers got Nananka's ship but hope to *diyu* that that wasn't the appetiser with Serenity being the planned main course. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 09 September 2006 19:48
Now that was a twist worthy of Our Fearful Leader himself, lonewolf7:D

Definitely loved how you had Gabriel and Zoe face off against one another over whether or not to kill Nanaka and his cohorts in cold blood, and both of them had damn fine arguments to back up their assertions. Truly have to wonder how long it would take Zoe's pain and anger at Wash's loss to start really messing with her behaviour and this development-cum-catharsis beautifully dealt with that undesirable issues;D

But the final paragraph was what really blew me away! It was lean but definitely poweful in evoking an image of Reaver vessels coming out of the night sky and just laying waste to the Fed patrol boat without warning:)

BEB

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