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Healing - Part II

Sunday, August 27, 2006

Mal continues his soul-searching with phantom Shepherd Book. In the outside world, River is a final hope for calming a potentially dangerous situation. To make matters worse, Agent Nanaka, the man in charge during the standoff in Brimstone, Beaumont, has accidentally happened across Serenity. Really all philosophizing and little action in this chapter, but is that always a bad thing?

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The wind was warm on Mal’s face. It seemed much warmer to him than it had been the last time he was here. Then again, if this was a dream world, or whatever it was, he supposed it didn’t have to make sense. Looking around at the burning ruins of Haven, Mal cleared his throat. “What’re we doin’ here? Where’s Gab?”

“Were you not done on Hera?” Book proposed. “Were there other loose ends to tie up? Were you not finished with Gabriel?”

Mal shrugged. “I guess not,” he replied. “So, what’ve you got here for me?”

Without an answer, Book began strolling down the dusty street. Mal followed him, and they stopped at the spot where the Shepherd had died.

The memory Book lay on the ground, bleeding from the sword wound through his torso. Mal glanced around to see if the ghostly mirrors of himself, his crew, and his ship were arriving, but none were in sight.

“The Operative came to my new home, his men murdered my people, and he slew me in the street,” the standing Book began. “All of this death… just to get to River.”

Mal swallowed a lump in his throat. He fought at the watering in his eyes, hoping against hope that it wouldn’t spill out. “I know, Shepherd,” he spoke after coughing the choke from his voice.

“You could have prevented this, Mal,” Book informed. “You could have stopped all of it from happening. All you would have needed to do was give River to the Alliance.”

Mal nodded in silence concurrence.

“That price was not worth the alternative world it would have created,” Book stated with finality. “You would feel much, much worse had you given River up, thus, saving the lives of me, my people, and all of the other people at your various hideouts. You made the right choice, and you should feel no shame, nor regret, about that choice.”

Mal stood, staring at the other Book, the Book that was dying on the sun-baked ground before him. He had nothing to say, so he merely listened.

“What you should feel, instead, is anger. Anger toward the Alliance, but not toward yourself. Vengeance is not an option, Ma

Comments
Sunday, 27 August 2006 10:03
Loved the dream images and dialogue especially the bit where Mal hugs the Book who may or may not be the ghost of the real Book and tells him he had been wanting to do that for a while. Nice to see how the others are faring as well though the approaching Alliance cops are yet another thorn in Serenity's side. Can't wait to see what happens next. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 27 August 2006 12:21
Thank God Mal is back! I loved the interaction with Book. I hope Mal remembers all of it. I'm still worried about Gabriel. If anyone can help him, it will be River. Great job on this one, Lonewolf.
Monday, 28 August 2006 06:54
Oh...all the dreams and visions and voice going on in this chapter was mucho shiny, but a tad bit odd to think on. Though I am glad Gabriel's got River to him fight the sudden influx of voices from the dead, and Mal had a "It's a Wonderful Life" moment with Book's spirit:)

BEB
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 02:47
I still love River and Gabriel - Gabe is one of my favorite OCs.

I think that it would be awesome if River can help Gabe because it might help her in the process, give her something else to focus on ...

I can't wait to read more!

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