Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Friends Among Enemies - Part V

Tuesday, August 22, 2006

I know this is a shorter one, but it gets the message across, and it makes up for the Operative's long-winded explanations in the last chapter... The plan of River unfolds against the Cornell Gang with predictable results, but Gabriel makes some uncharacteristic actions that may or may not affect future events.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1632    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The Operative sighed as he pulled his ship from orbit around the planet called Hera. *Just one more puzzle piece set into place...* Scratching at an itch that had materialized on the left side of his neck, the man verified the course set into his nav computer and finally allowed himself to relax. He began mentally practicing the final steps of his plan. His next stop would be to finish his dealings with the Resistance.

The entire ordeal was a slow and meticulous process. It required incredible amounts of strategy, political flexibility, and strong patience. The Operative possessed all of these qualities, and after almost a year, it seemed that the seeds were nearly all sewn. *Once that is finally accomplished, it shouldn’t take long for those seeds to grow and bloom… into civil war.*

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Bull stopped his horse as the McDavin homestead came into view. Eighteen men on horseback halted around and behind him. “There’s two horses tied up out front,” he commented, peering through a rusty set of binoculars. “Two horses missin’. Mule, too.” He lowered the binoculars. “Somebody’s gotta be home.” He chambered a round in his lever action. “What say we pay someone a little visit, Boys?”

All seemed to be in agreement, and the small cavalry descended upon the home like ants attacking a rival anthill. The closer they got to the house, however, the more Bull’s nerves began to go on edge.

“Don’t see no activity, Bull,” Chester commented as the group stopped in front of the house. “Mebbe they ain’t home, after all.”

“Fei hua,” Tinksy observed. “They got two horses tied up.”

“Don’t mean this ain’t a trap,” Bull warned. “Zhu tamin ya min zhu yi. So there’s two horses an’ a mule missin’. They got two o’ their horses left behind. Nah mei guan-shee.”

Three shots were fired in succession in the distance behind the group, and all turned to see a figure on horseback a good distance away. “Let’s get after ‘em!” Bull shouted, and the team of horses were redire

Comments
Tuesday, 22 August 2006 17:04
That was one very efficient way to deal with a pile of *wangba dans* and Gabriel's comment about the blood at the end was spooky. Hope they find a way to heal the Captain soon, it just doesn't feel right without him somewhere in the story mix. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 22 August 2006 21:40
Really like how this was tense, then let up for a bit and then was tense again ... keep updating please!
Thursday, 24 August 2006 02:40
Just when I think things may straighten out, something else weird happens. And man, I'm worried about Gabriel. He ain't making sense. And his brother is alive? Who might that be? Anyone we know? Hurry with more. I can't take the suspense!
LONEWOLF7
Thursday, 24 August 2006 04:42
All in good time, my friends. All in good time.
Monday, 28 August 2006 06:39
Gotta give Gabe props...regardless of any past or future comments about his nature or status as a person, he took the honorable and better road by not killing Sarah Cornell. Though I gotta wonder if him breaking her desk with a single blow was a tad bit overdramatic;)

The whole "I'm covered in blood" comment though...it gives me great pause. Is Gabe going nuts...or is he perceiving something to come in a way that differs from River:(

BEB

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