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02x01 Firefly - Good Luck Charm pt. 2

Monday, August 21, 2006

A neglected child brings aboard more then just another mouth to feed.

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Zoe looked back at the girl, who was not exactly clean. She looked like she’d been left outside to tend for herself for weeks.

“No.” said Jayne with a upset glare.

“Did someone say girl?” said Wash who chimed in from the cockpit comm.

“No.” Jayne said again, angrier then before.

“We’ll drop her on Ta Chi Station, she can be taken to an orphanage from there.” Mal said with a concerned glare at the short girl. Shepard Book watched quietly from his vantage point smiling slightly as he thought about what Mal had done.

“No.” Jayne said with a concerned glare. “Captain we can’t be taken on anymore charity cases.”

“What are you aboard for again?” Mal asked as he looked over to see the girl hiding behind a crate. The incident on Ariel still fresh in his mind, Jayne backed down faster then usual. River and Kaylee entered together, with River guiding Kaylee as if she was going to see a new pet.

“I’m smart, is why, and cap, I don’t think this is a smart idea. We already got one to many lil’ girls run around fiddlin’ with stuff as it is.” Jayne said with a shake of his head, he walked off, not wishing to debate it any further.

“Hi sweet thing what’s your name.” Said Kaylee in a baby like manner. The little girl smiled at her but still remained refused to move. She took the girl by the hand and let her out. “Come on now, it’ll be alright.” Kaylee said as River and approached her from behind.

“Infantile banter is not effective with this subject.” River said bending over and looking intently between the crate and Kaylee at the new guest. “I feel sick.” River said shortly and backed away towards the stairs.

“She was virtually tied up like a dog back there, I couldn’t just leave her. When our

'friends' showed up, they tossed the money and started shooting, this one grabbed the money and hightailed it. ” Mal said as the Doctor entered wondering what the commotion was about. He had just finished a rather exhaustive inventory of supplies and hear Jayne’s outburst.

“Was she mistreated?” He said sur

Comments
GYPSYCDK
Monday, 21 August 2006 15:55
Great story but just don't leave me hanging. I really like it so far!
GYPSYCDK
Monday, 21 August 2006 15:55
Great story but just don't leave me hanging. I really like it so far!
Monday, 21 August 2006 17:11
Hahaha, I know it probably wasn't meant to be funny, but just the name 'Hauptiliococous Dephiadia', for some reason made me laugh. Maybe it reminded me of 'Hippopotomous Diarrhea'.

Otherwise, I really liked this story. It's also nice to have the crew be in danger other than the shot/stabbed/kidnapped scenario (they are still entertaining though).

More please:)
Monday, 21 August 2006 19:14
So this is a war hallucinatory desease? At one point I thought you were going to turn the little girl into Typhoid Mary which would have been one of the shortest stories in the gorram 'verse. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
DESERTGIRL
Wednesday, 23 August 2006 04:58
Can't wait to find out where this is going. Some disease that makes you forget ten years??? I hope it is curable. I wonder what it will do to River???
Monday, 28 August 2006 03:58
Oh...now this is interesting. Mal's regressed about a decade. So why isn't he freaking out over the rest of the crew, since he wouldn't have met them yet?

Still...I am intrigued. Can't wait to read part 3:)

BEB

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