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The Hunted - Part One

Saturday, June 5, 2004

Ok, this fic has a bit of a weird opening but I'm trying to be original. If you could take the time to read my small fic it would be greatly appreciated. The crew are given a simple pick up and drop off mision but unsurprisingly things don't go according to plan. They soon find themself being hunted down by a seemingly invincible killer who won't stop untill he has got what he was sent for.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2985    RATING: 7.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Let her go!”

“Where is he Mr. Reynolds?”

“He’s long gone! No idea where he is now!”

“It’s not wise to play dumb when I have a well made sword at your crew member’s throat.”

“I can take ‘im!”

“Jayne don’t do anything!”

“We dropped him off at Leonda!”

“Cap’n don’t tell ‘im”

“Mr. Reynolds you have ten seconds to give me Raiden’s real location or there is gonna be a lot of innocent blood spilt on your beautiful cargo floor.”

“I told you!”

“10”

“He’s on Leonda!”

“9”

“I have a shot!”

“8”

“Jayne don’t!”

“7”

“Kaylee!”

“6”

“Doc stay back!”

“5”

“She’s slipping.”

“4”

“We’re all going to die.”

“3”

“River not now!”

“2”

“He’s not here!”

“1”

“NO!”

In one movement the sword slit across her neck. Kaylee looked shocked for a second before she fell lifelessly to the floor. Jayne was the first to attack. He fired furiously at the intruder who dodged the bullets with ease. The intruder front flipped through the air and landed behind Jayne. Before Jayne knew what was going on the same sword which killed Kaylee was sticking out of the front of his chest. He staggered a bit before he fell and landed on his stomach, Vera still clenched in his right hand. Mal, Zoë, Wash and Book opened fire. The intruder back flipped and landed on a platform above them. He took a millisecond to aim and then took Book out with a head shot. Blood splattered across the side of Wash. He stopped shooting and looked down at himself in shock. The blood of a preacher stained his body. The killer saw an opening and took it. Taking his sword out of its holder he threw it directly at Wash. It pierced his chest and went all the way in. Wash looked at Zoë who had the same look of shock on her face that he had. He squeezed her arm affectionately before falling backwoods onto the floor. Sword still sticking out of his chest. Zoë stood and started at her husband’s dead body for a few seconds before rage took over grief. She dropped the two pistols she had been using and instead pic

Comments
Saturday, 05 June 2004 16:52
interesting start, but i've gotta say i hope the intro was a dream:(:(:(
Saturday, 05 June 2004 20:31
If that intro was how this story is going to end up that I am going to be all kinds of unhappy. Just don't do a Dallas on us and make it all something dreamt up in the shower. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 June 2004 16:13
Ok...You asked, I read. Gotta say, don't like the beginning of this one gorram bit. You're writing and tone go down well enough for me tho', so I'll tune in to see where this goes... may be peekin' thru my fingers tho'.
Ms.Sam
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 June 2004 16:14
Ok...You asked, I read. Gotta say, don't like the beginning of this one gorram bit. Your writing and tone go down well enough for me tho', so I'll tune in to see where this goes... may be peekin' thru my fingers tho'.
Ms.Sam
Tuesday, 06 December 2005 07:40
Not a fan of character death in the Firefly 'verse but it's kinda intoxicatin' all the same.

Luc

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