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Aftermath - The renegade - Prologue

Thursday, August 17, 2006

Set a few months after the film, things seem to be settling down, or do they?

This is my first attempt at any sort of serious writing, I'm mainly doing it cos I want to read the story so if people dont like it (though I hope someone does) meh.

This is also my first post here so hi, I don't know if this is the right way to post a multi part fanfic, it seems a bit inefficient but that may just be me.

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“He bothers me.”

“You said that first time we met Wash.”

“I know that sir, but this guy REALLY bothers me.”

Captain Malcolm ‘Mal’ Reynolds and his first officer Zoë Washburne sat facing each other in the small but surprisingly adequate main dining area aboard the Firefly class transport vessel Serenity, eating what looked, and, if Jayne Cobb was to be believed, tasted, like dirt.

“We’re not exactly Alliances most favourite people right about now and they’re still looking for the two most wanted downstairs, I really don’t think a new crew member is a good idea.”

“I don’t myself but we don’t ‘ave many options, he’s no Wash but he’s the best on the ship, excepting maybe that little genius we have and there aint no way I’m putting her in charge of Serenity. He‘ll have to do for now.”

“I like him” said Jayne, passing through on his way to the bridge.

The object of their discussion was sat up in that very same bridge, the control centre of the ship, carefully navigating their way to the moon of Talgos, still another 3 days out but requiring all his attention to avoid anyone elses. His name was Kenton and was quite possibly what Jayne would be had he learnt to fly instead of shoot. He was a thug and a merc and yet at the same time a getaway pilot and proud of it. He could complete a run from Persephone to Osiris in less than three days, or so he claimed, of course not in this ship when asked to prove it - ‘Fireflys ain‘t got the speed‘. He had now been on the ship almost 5 weeks and in that time very little had changed, life had become a little too routine. Mal and Zoë would debate the new recruit while Jayne talked with him, he had said barely 10 words to some other members of the crew and the divisions were starting to show.

After the retrofit Mal had flown the ship for a while but due to a narrow escape from the law 2 months ago the need for a pilot for fast getaways from deals became all too apparent. And that’s where Kenton came in. After weeks of looking round to no avail they were

Comments
Thursday, 17 August 2006 06:54
Sorry if this counts as a double post, just wanted to say a few things possibly not made clear in the small blurb at the top.

1) This is (now) my second post on this forum so if I got it wrong for a multi part fanfic, sorry, I did look abut first.

2) As stated above this is also my first attempt at any sort of decent writing so it may not be great, but tbh I'm more bothered about the story. I'm also not too used to writing in the dialect but hopefully I'll pick it up as a go.

3) As also stated already this is a multi-part story (or the worlds most boring single part, but it's not) it's a bit slow now but it will pick up, trust me, although having said that I don't know how much the frequency will pick up, this is a microscopic spare time thing so...

4) Hi.
Thursday, 17 August 2006 11:24
I'm with Serenity, I don't like Kenton either. Not because he has done anything wrong but because he is so circumspect, not mixing with most of the crew and so on. A man with dark secrets I'm thinking, probably darker than anyone else on the boat. Plus with Serenity AND Zoe not liking him, I am all kinds of alert for whatever it is he is really up to. Glad to know Jayne is under no illusions about the new guy either. And this is a great start so no need to doubt yourself. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 17 August 2006 15:06
Well, this was a very nice start for your first fic!

I like River wondering what place she has in Simon's life now that he is with Kaylee.

And lordie may, I'm not sure who will snap first with another man like Jayne on board - Zoe, Serenity or Mal!

And - uh... Kenton COBB? As in related to Jayne?

Looking forward to the next part.
Saturday, 19 August 2006 00:41
Cheers, those prompted me to write the next part faster than I planned so it's about now. And I was wondering if anyone would notice that little bit on the end, all will be revealed.
Sunday, 20 August 2006 18:23
Gotta presume Kenton is a fairly distant relative of Jayne's, or I would presume another BDH would have noticed the physical similiarities between them. Unless you're being less than forthcoming on that aspect, YLess;)

Definitely seeing this as a plausible post-BDM state of being for the crew: Kaylee's got Simon and their making up for lost time; River's happy for Simon and Kaylee, but struggling to find her place amongst the crew now that she's saner; Mal and Zoe unhappy about needing to find a qualified pilot, but also still unsure if River's healthy enough upstairs to have her take the stick, and River and Zoe bonding over being the odds one out emotionally.

Great stuff here so far, YLess. Can't wait for part 1;)

BEB
Tuesday, 22 August 2006 09:22
Probaly should have put this in the last post, part 1 is already out here:

http://www.fireflyfans.net/bluesun.aspx?bid=12503

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