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The New 'Verse - Chapter II

Tuesday, August 15, 2006

The Miranda Wave has been sent out, and life still goes on out there on the raggedy edge. Now, Inara helps Simon as only she can. S/K, hints of M/I.

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II

They were alone in the cargo bay, now – River and Mal were up on the bridge, the rest of the crew devoted to their own tasks. Simon’s focus was entirely on Inara, watching the way she moved in response to him. His actions were hasty, he knew – it had been too long since the last time he had done this. Too much energy wasted, while hers were quick, smooth, well-practiced. When he brought himself forward, she answered him perfectly, bodies moving around each other until their positions were reversed, eyes still intent on each other. She smiled at his enthusiasm, obviously glad to be putting some of her training to use.

When they broke apart after their first interchange, Inara cast a reassessing eye over the young doctor. “You’re surprisingly good at this, Simon. I never would have guessed at this hidden talent of yours.”

Simon beamed at her praise. “I haven’t done this in… well, in a long time. Certainly not since I put everything aside to try and rescue River. I’d almost forgotten how much I’d enjoyed it.”

“It seems like you’ve had some real education in this art. Where did you learn?”

“Well, there was a girl at my secondary school – we dated for a little while when I was about sixteen. She was the year ahead of me, and, well, she was good. Extremely good. After classes in the afternoon, we’d go down to the gymnasium and she’d teach me. Even after she graduated and we broke up, I could usually find someone to practice with. There was never a shortage of partners at the MedAcad, either – it’s one of those things that we snobby Core kids all seemed to learn how to do.”

“Well, it’s a shame that you haven’t had a lot of opportunity out here. Staying in practice can be surprisingly useful when the need arises.” Simon was good, but he didn’t have the confidence or precision of a true expert, Inara decided. The conversation was distracting him, she saw, and she took the opportunity to get under his arm. He flinched slightly when he felt the touch on his leg.

He smiled sheepishly

Comments
Tuesday, 15 August 2006 15:20
Oh, this was so well done! I love that Simon wants to cling to a bit of his old life while using that to protect himself and those he loves.

>Yeah, but he was just as crazy as River, in his own well-meaning, homicidal way. That’s not a point in favor.

That was SUCH an excellent comment from Mal.

Really, all of the dialogue ran very true to the characters. And you don't find that very often. Well done!

>Didn’t mean it like that. River knows that she and Simon don’t have a daddy anymore.”

This just pulled at my heartstrings!

>Mal suddenly felt very much like a mean old man.

He's not heartless, he does care about the siblings. This was a perfect place to end this chapter!
Thursday, 17 August 2006 06:31
Ooh...Mal probably feels like an ass right now, though I can understand his hesitancy in River's use of the endearment "Captain Daddy" or "Daddy" when it comes to himself. Probably not too comfortable in thinking of his ownself being a good father:(

Still...loved the fencing scene being veiled in a gutter test way;) Definitely jumped to the right conclusion immediately...but it was still fun to assume Simon and Inara were getting their groove on;)

BEB

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